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for Two Hands Are Better Than One

by bakaneko

person Choister
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whooa... The ending was so great. I'm in awe.

Please update soon.
person casey
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH hahahahahahaha that was too FUny!! I liked it vera much. Cant wait for some smut! Hooray for smut!!!
this is such a cute fic!
person sizzle
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea, that's awesome. his frigid dick, hehe. i like where the story goes and how there are breaks with the action. narru's agressiveness and the slow sorting of things out is entertaining, combined with the fact that both are really turned on by each other, lol
person Miranda_Ocean
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I know exactly what you mean, NONE of my friends like anime and they think I'm nerdy for watching it cause it's 'for kids" KEH! stupid narrow-minded ppl eh? lol great story, I'll keep reading^_^
person lo
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how you ended ch.4. I enjoy the tension that you are able to create. I can't wait to see the next chapter. keep up the good work.
person sugar bunn
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, yay, this was amazing!
please, please update... i can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ky0kichi
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mouuuuu! I've been waiting for this chapter for so long..But Nooo Naruto is all like.........BLAH!

>__< Ehehe. I really liked the whole Sasuke falling through the door thing, that's baka. ^_^;;; Ehehe, it's always nice to share body heat, don't ya think? ^_^

Please don't take so long to update this time! >.<;;;; BAI
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter! I am so happy that you wrote me and told me you updated! I hope to read another chapter soon. So far this new chapter is my favorite. I love the way you depict Naruto. His sleezy comment always bring a smile and blush to my face. I can't wait to find out were Sasuke will sleep. Personally I hope he sleeps on the couch, make Naruto do a little chasing. After all. Two can play at that game, right? I really like this story so update asap! Please send me another e-mail when you do!
person sarah
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so when is the next chapter comin' out eh? and boy am i liking, no LOVIN' this fic!
person tatemshope
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You better keep this story up! I am way too attached to it now! You are doing such a great job and I love how confidant Naruto is! He's really keeping Sasuke off balance. Poor cold Sasuke though.... I almost cried when he came through the door!!!!