rate_review Reviews

I love how this story's progressing. I loved, mostly, how you kept everyone in-character.

It's a must for me for characters to be in sync with the way they act in the real thing.

I love the humor. And the LEMON, it was very good ^^ in all it's steamy-hot glory.

I expect good things from this story, keep 'em comin' ^^

OMFG, its been so damn long, i forgot all about this. And now im remembering how fucking hot this fic truely is. You have got to hurry and update, pa-lease, your killing me. update soon, im begging ya.

Wanna see wanna see! wanna see what happens next!

Hmmm.I am afraid it reads rather shallowly on Naruto's part.The guy,Sasuke, half killed himself to get there and spoke first and showed his vulnerability and is suffering from hypothermia and Naruto says he isn't gonna have sex with him and leaves him in a dark apartment with one candle to take care of himself?.He wanted Sasuke to do this,to respond , and ,miracle ,he has ,and now he teases him in more ways than one? And is a bad host not to mention he is playing fast and loose with Sasuke's health.It was tender and funny and hot then, boom !this air head Naruto acting like a 12 year old comes outa no where and acts spastic.Ita almost like right at the end you decided to make the story longer and added that in.And they where curled up on the floor doing so well and they could have had an erotic rub Sasuke dry party.It was a shock I'm telling you! Naruto was pensive then napping just before Sasuke got there ,heck he was scared and finally he has someone to ride out the storm with,good work there, then snnnnnap,he spazzes.Oh well,I liked the rest natch.Thank you and hope to read you soon since this could be hot!!!!!!!!Yeah!

Yay! I love this one- its fun, and well written. (And of course, I loooove to see Sauske being kept off keel!!! So cute!). Great to see an update- I'll enjoy seeing Sauske's come back to Naruto's challenge!

I'm very glad you updated ^^. I thought you had forgotten about it some time ago but bookmarked it anyway.
It's been a good long while since I found a decent NaruxSasu fic [just 'cause I favor SasUKE, eh] and... well, what can I say, hm.
Your writing skillage pwns, liek t0tally.
I love how the character interaction is still very in character, especially how Sasuke deals with things [shrugs]. Of course, seme!Naruto
is like the happiest bonus thinger ever. Yep.

Anyway, I hope you update soon, please and thank you.

this is fun to read. Not only is it hot, it is also well written. I love the tension.

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeet!!
Your story is awesome, I really hope you'll stick to your writing shedule and we're going to enjoy the next chap within 2 weeks!!!
Because I JUST CANT WAIT TO SEE SOME SMUT AGAIN!!! Ha! Your lemons are marvelously sexy, just like the characters themselves :)

well i thought the shower scene was hot. vulnerable sasuke is always hot. heehee. i'm looking forward to more ^^

Sweet.Again>I loved tha action.Umm yea it was sucky.Nar.Bad ,silly me.No it was good .I love descriptions of a preorgasmic sasuke.Naruto is hot here.You go Naruto!