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for Two Hands Are Better Than One

by bakaneko

person Anon
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF MISTER YOU NEED TO UPDATE!!! -is getting depserate-
person Darkness-Consumer
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For someone who had never written a scene like that before, you did a hella good job! It was brilliant :P and I'm loving this story - update soon!
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy hell that was hot! update!!
person Anon
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\/(^_^)\/ so goooooooooooood! waaaa Sasuke is so hot. and dominate Naruto is so freakin sexy!!!
person Naraku
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"KU KU KU KU i finally have the completed Shikon No Tama" *closes eyes and giggles like a school girl* "Shikon no Tama, i wish that the author would update with a super steamy Sasuke and Naruto sex scene! Ku KU KU KU KU KU" ~bright pink light flashes~ "WAAAAAA gotta get ready!!!" *grabs lawn chair and popcorn* "Yosh! ready to read the lemony goodness!!!!! KU KU KU KU"
person ky0kichi
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh myyyy. Oh how I completely enjoyed that chapter....

In all the fics Naruto is always the uke. It's so great seeing Naruto be in charge for once. I love it. You need to update soon...

ITS BEEN FOREVER and I'm craving moreeeeee *Begs* ;.;
person kataru
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hnn... This is funny. I found this really funny.. yep! The way you write the scenes are funny. Im not flaming you, this is a compliment. Yep! And hnn, you portrait sasuke a bit ooc, just bit, this is comedy right? And I like the scenes about swallowing his damned pride. Yay! he's lustfull...... O,o :popcorn:
person rAiNwAtEr
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is very interesting so far and I hope you update soon. If it is not to hard could you send me an e-mail when you do?

Whishing you the best of luck,

~~~~rAiNwAtEr~~~
person Ry
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for the pretty lemony thing! *pets it* ^^ *coughcough*
person chem chick
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey now, that was not sucky at all...I'd say it was suck-free! Great story, can't wait to see what happens next!