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Yargh! That wasn't sucky at all! It was wonderful ^____^ Update sooon please! :(

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give me smut
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*shrug* Hey, it's not about weakness X3. Nice~

I don't agree with you at all. It didn't suck (well Naruto did...haha O.o). I really enjoyed chapter 3. I thought it was both hot and tasteful. Well done! I'm very much looking forward to what happens when Sasuke gets home!

Oh god, that shower scene was so freakin hot!! It didn't suck at all!*Grins* At least not in a bad way.^^
I am very curious as to what Sasuke's reaction well be when he gets back from his mission. And how Naruto will go about trying to win the Uchiha's affection. But it would be interesting to have the Uchiha return and turn the tables around on Naruto. Be the one to pursue him and tease him. And will you have any love rivals in this fic? Say like Neji or Gaara? Or who ever else? That might be interesting...
Update soon, kay? Really want to read more. Seriously, that smut was good!*Fans self off* Ja ne!

Really good!!! I was sort of questioning the second chapter, because it was confusing as to WHAT Sauske was referring to- but I rather like how the 3rd chapter brought it all together. Looking forward to more! :)

Mmmmmm........very yummy chapter! ^___~ Excellently done -- your characterizations and descriptions are still wonderful, btw. (It's always nice when an author's style doesn't deteriorate as the story progresses, ne?) Lol, I can't wait to find out what Naruto's course of action will be....... ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!

^__^ i'm definately liking this story, and to tell you the truth i really liked the way sauske was the submissive one. I'm excited to see how this story progresses!

The flashback was a little short on detail,esp after that great build up but flashing from veiw point to veiw point to lead up to it was a good move.I like that Naruto is pretty strong on this and I am glad to hear you intend on then both experiancing topping and bottom,its really nice to hear whats going through their heads ,how they are being affected.Umm,blowjobs ect. generally have the balls and some kind of ass/anal action going on,I know these things are a bitch to write.Well done,looking forward to this ,not as much as Naruto perhaps.Lets hope Sasuke can keep his mind on buiseness(spelling,sorry) or...he will be trapped in... hey bed!Thanks.

you are such an usuratonkachi! your writing is great! you can't tell yourself those things, trust me, it doesn't help. i admire your writing style a lot, not because of the yaoi(tho, that was good too) but because it in it's self is excellent. BTW, your friend knows nothing (no offense to either of you)

Ciao, and don't let anyone tell you anything about you sucks! ^.^