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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon :o
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your story and I can't wait to read more. I love the way the two always challenge each other over everything. I'm glad you made that a big part of your fic. ^_^ It's great.
BTW: My friends don't understnad "that cartoon crap" either, so I understand you.
BTW: My friends don't understnad "that cartoon crap" either, so I understand you.
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! You updated!!! *glomps* Thank you!!! ^^ This was really good.......... it wasn't enjoyable as the first chapter, for obvious reasons, but still good!! ^___~ I can't wait for the next chapter -- keep up the good work!!!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* Okay, I KNOW that I review after reading the first chapter of this thing, but for some reason it isn't there.......hmmmmmmm......... ^^ Ah, well, in case it was my computer's fault (which is entirely possible, lol) and you didn't get to read it, it basically said, "OMG!!! This fic is amazing!!! Very funny, and with great characterizations and descriptions -- you have to continue it!!!" Yadda, yadda.......you get the point, ne? ^___~ Again, thanks for the update, and keep up the good work!!!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm, the first chapter was great, but the way this one started was a little confusing.
I guess I was expecting the shower scene to continue, and it seemed rather abrupt when you didn't even really refer to it much.
Still a good story, though. Try to make it a little more cohesive.
Update soon!
I guess I was expecting the shower scene to continue, and it seemed rather abrupt when you didn't even really refer to it much.
Still a good story, though. Try to make it a little more cohesive.
Update soon!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yosh! I'm quite happy you've decided to make it more chappies I loved it please I can't wait to find out how naruto felt about it yum
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yes, please do continue, i think this story has the potential to be a totally HOT kick ass NARU-SASU-NARU fic!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I so know what you mean about friends not getting it. They call my anime shows cartoons too! So you're not alone.^^
Anyway, I like it so far. Very curious about what happened in the shower.XP
Update soon, kay? Want to read more! You are doing great so far.
P.S. If ya want, contact me and maybe I can help ya with story ideas. If not, at least bounce ideas off each other. That's always fun.^^
Anyway, I like it so far. Very curious about what happened in the shower.XP
Update soon, kay? Want to read more! You are doing great so far.
P.S. If ya want, contact me and maybe I can help ya with story ideas. If not, at least bounce ideas off each other. That's always fun.^^
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^YATTAA!!!!^^
Your story is really G.R.E.A.T......
I really admired your work....
I hope you continue it and upload it as fast as you can..!!!
I 'll be waiting
(~Giving you a great big hug~)^ ^Good Luck In your Future Chapters~~~~
Your story is really G.R.E.A.T......
I really admired your work....
I hope you continue it and upload it as fast as you can..!!!
I 'll be waiting
(~Giving you a great big hug~)^ ^Good Luck In your Future Chapters~~~~
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting keep up the good work update soon