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Sweeeeeeeeeet. continue it. now. email me when you update. my email is deannathx@comcast.net

Yo, I'm not even sure you will ever read this review, but I really think you should finish this story. It's such an awesome story.

Ne~ This story is good, un. Akatsuki, finally aa village, mn. Uptade soon, un? Until then, mn.

Ja ne, mn!!!


~Hisuka Uchiha

hey that was a great chapter i cant wait to read what will happen next please update soon

i like the story so far i cant wait for the next chapter upadate soon
oh and email me when you do update

JA NE

wow your story is jsut sooo good i just cant wait to see an update!!! please update soon!!! ^_^

also i noticed you got a review from armed and dangerous. you can just ignore that fucking bastard who doesnt know what the hell hes talking about. who cares if he read a bad fic. maybe the author didnt HAVE the manga to refer back to. your fic was very wonderfull and i dont think you were the one speaking but you took the characters personalities and made them shine!!! personally i would be in awe if naruto was early too ^_^ its not like anyone actually KNOWS what akatsuki means in the first place unless you are very much into naruto and anime and look up EVERYTHING. this just proves that mr armed and dangerous is reatarded neadrathal with no life. and if it means red moon or whatever then why are there clouds on their cloaks? so you just ignore that bastard who doesnt know what hes talking about and keep writing!!! your work is very good and i think your a very talented writer!!! =D *stabs armed loser and dangerous cause hes stupid*

Good premise for a story, but it just isn't long enough. T.T Seriously. I know how hard it is to write stories, but please, try to bump it up a few pages each update. Also, Ino accepted it way too fast. You could have dragged that out for a few more chapters while making it more realistic.
Still, I love the story. Keep at it!

Okay. I'm being perfectly honest here. That was lame. You could have tried something very different or just skip over it altogether, but for him to just mirror what actually happened in the manga was unoriginal, and lazy work. If someone gave you a flame, it should have came from this chapter, since it was going smooth.

WTF is this? I'm so disgusted by this story that I can't even begin to clearly explain what's wrong with it, but I'll try. First of all, your not writing in the voices of the characters; it's just your voice I'm getting. Secondly, everyone is out of character, especially Itachi. He would never show such emotion as fear and awe just because Naruto happened to come to a meeting early. Thirdly, do you even know what Akatsuki means? It sure as hell has nothing to do with the sun. Get a Japanese dictionary or something if you want to try to translate the language in this series, because Akatsuki means "Red Moon." I'll break it down for you so you know what I mean: 'aka' = 'red' , 'tsuki' = 'moon'. Get your facts straight before you make an attempt like that; do your research. I once read a fic where the person who wrote it didn't know the name of Hinata's sister (which is Hanabi) and kept refering to her as "Hinata's sister" when all she had to do was re-read that part of the manga where Hanabi was first introduced. You were lazy and ended up making that same mistake. Again, get you shit together.