AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.

rate_review Reviews

for Bitchy Gifts

by dobe

person Buh
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty sure he was talking to kyuubi, might want to bolden the text if that's the case to differentiate between the two. Oh and please continue.
person KirikouChan
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Deidara? Naked?
Squeeeeeeeee!

Just a little warning ahead though....
Deidara's OFFICIALLY a guy, yeah... >>
(It's good either way, but still, yeah X3)
person cronor
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"He thinks a pissed off Ino is a gift?"

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

This is great! Bit short thou...
person Neal
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wish I could write this good. Kyuubi taking over when Naruto is sexually driven was excellent, the slave seal was cool and it has Ino! I'm going to be impatiently waiting for more.
person blacky
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definetly interesting start. But who was he talking to? And its rather short..
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This one seems kind of funny. I don't know why, but i find the plot to be prospectively humorous. I wonder what happened in this post-akatsuki world.