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for Train Me Pervert or Else

by Mieren

person animegirl
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh god that was HOT!!!!! you have to write more, please please please!!! i would love to read that threesome, it'd be SOOOO HOOOOOTTTT!!!!!!!!!!
person EscagirlUK
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Threesome? Oooo, please do! Great fic, not my fav of pairings, but pretty cool.
person Asa ReMe
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! That was so hot!!!!!!!!!!! DO some more do some more do some more!!!!!! (Laughing/giggleing/cackeling) God, that was great!!!!!!!!! What's next a threesome between Kaka/Iru/Naru? Please say yes!! Keep this story goin'!!!
person Rinpu
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! Surely a Kakashi/Naruto/Iruka threesome is next, hmm? ^___^
person Bealmira
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are magnificent. This is not praise, but a simple statement of truth. You work is so great, so cute, so evil, so wonderful… It's amazing. I had almost given up hope that people like you exist. Thank you for reestablishing that hope. You're hilarious! I was laughing through most of the fic, just completely overwhelmed by the sheer brilliance of it. You are the best. Hands down. Please, please find it in your heart to continue with this fic!
person MarvoloSledgeHammer
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM


Lol. Pretty funny! (Chuckling)

I feel horrible for Kakashi, though.

He didn't exactly deserve being 'tortured' like that. But, Oh~ Well.

Well, see you around!

-MSH
person someone
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
writte another chapter! this fic is great ^_^
person Anon
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! GO FOR A THIRD! YOU ROCK MY SOCKS AND JOCKS oh so well! ^.^ i DO love you! lol
You're story is awesome, good job!! ^.^ ^.^ ^.^
XOXO
person kaya
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wai! I liked this fic as one-shot, but the follow-up was fun. Hopefully you'll follow through with the threesome (PLEASE!!) although I think if Iruka really has time to consider it his head will explode!! LOL update again soon, please!
person Erika
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG...I LOVED that it was GREAT but damn...GEEZ!!! just WOW!!! oh yea I hope you do make a 3rd chapter....3-some...interesting thought though you have to wonder how Iruka is gonna react to the fact that Kakashi had Naruto...Interesting...that was GREAT and I was laughing so much I was getting some weird looks at the computer lab...oh well...LOL...THANKS:D