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for Train Me Pervert or Else

by Mieren

person Cloud_Haven
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woo this was hot and funny!
person riversprite77
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic!! The jokes Naruto pulled were so great!! I hope you do more with this story, you could do soooooooo much. A threesome would be great, Iruka just has to find out some how. You could even go father, even after the threesome happens, Naruto has this whole new sexual world open to him. He still needs to thank Neji for his help ;D;D!!!!! You could even turn it into a little love story between the two!
person Sakatsu
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE, MORE, I say!!!

Its goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddddddddd~ you MUST write more for us alllllll~
person kakashi=rawrness
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<3 <3 <3 kakashi in this!

RAWR! you should write some more ^^ I like your style of writing.
person Iceheart
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^/////^ I don't usually go for KakaNaru. But this was hot!!!! So lusty!!! Eh....Kakashi should have tried more foreplay....you know torture him a bit....still it was hot!!
Go for the threesome!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Fucking. GOD. XP That was AMAZING!!! I never thought that I'd like a Kaka/Naru fic, but that! That was the most spectacular thing I've ever read!!! ^^ Okay, so maybe that's exagerating a bit, but not by much!!! Seriously, that was quite well done -- engaging, creative, tastefully smutty, and sooooooo funny!!! ^___~ I absolutely loved this, and I definetly think that you should continue it -- along the lines of a threesome, perhaps Iruka finds out what Kakashi did, and is about to...I dunno, punish him, or something...when Naruto shows up and tells him that he liked it/that Kakashi didn't hurt him/whatever. Of course, Naru-kun would have to prove that he's telling the truth, and all, soooooo........... *perverted grin* ^___~ I'm sure what ever you come up with will be wonderful -- keep up the good work!!!
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eghhhh, *chokes* That was soooooooo good. I was hoping Sasuke would find Naruto, but tht was just as good. So hot!
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So is Sasuke going to get involved?
person YuriKuro
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mouahhhww!!!!
Didn't think it would turn out that way! Way to go!
So hilarious and well...*blushing like mad* It gave me chills like wooOoooo....héhé
Anyway...Let's go for a third one!!
Keep on going dammit, that's an awsome fic you got, it shouldn't end just now.=^.^=
I really like it....

See ya
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One of the better KakaIru fics I've read for awhile, good job ^__^

And did I mention it's oh so hot >_<