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for Leaf On The Breeze

by shuichi212000

person blisblop
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Coup not coo as in "coup de ta".Hope they get out.
person blisblop
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it turned out different.Great to see you at it.Its hard to track down stories after all that fuss last year,so many great stories lost........so sad.But, here you are!
person dimonyo-anghel
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it! And I'm glad you decided to continue this fic! Who was Sasuke's boyfriend before anyways? Die Sakura, die!!
person Kokuryuuha_018
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. A captivating plot, and one of my favorite pairings! I've noticed a few grammatical error, and trouble with paragraphing, and was wondering if you needed a beta. Then I saw that you WERE in need of one... and decided I really need to read authors notes. Anyways, if you want me to beta any new chapters, i would be more than happy to. You can reach me at the email address I've supplied, and if possible, give me a 'yes' or a 'no'. I would love to edit this ofr you, so I hope you'll consider.
person blisblop
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello hello.your back!argh,I can't think Naruto bought it and I hate to think of Sasuke( being reencarnated over and over to be chased by Saskra and Orochimaru,Hmmm which is worse both stalkers both want his body, neither care how he acts as long as he is with them, niether care for his primary goal ) being so trapped,Again this is exciting and interesting.Glad to see it up!
person faith
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ILOVE YOU MARRRRRRRRRRRY ME!!!!!<3<3

great fic omg sasuke is soooooooooo uke and cute here!!!omg gun's!!!!!!!!XDw00tless

this is my first shika x sasu fic and it's awesome!!!your my idol i bow down to thee*worships*

please please please pretty please update soon ^___^

you Rock!!
person kawaii kitsune-kun
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... ShikaSasu sure is rare... It deserves more love >.<. Anyway, I like where it's going... but I think there's something wrong with the paragraphs. They're all bunched up together into a huge one. I don't know if it's your problem or aff's, but could you please try to do something about it? It's really hard to wade through massive paragraphs like that. However, besides that, I see nothing wrong with the story at all, so update soon! Love it!
person kawaii kitsune-kun
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF?! They cut off the rest of my review! Anyway, to continue, just now I was actually complaining about the paragraphs in the rest of my review. They're all bunched together making it really hard to read, so I hope you can do something about it. Other than that, love it, so update soon!

>.< I hope it doesn't cut off my review this time.
person remi
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually like the thought of Shika x Sasu intresting. :) I hope you are going to continue.
person blisblop
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good.Good.Good.Sasuke cannot B.S. Shika,this is gonna be good.