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by bjorkfan

person Lisan
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo this is an awesome story...oneshot, or no?
person taceo
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Geez, it's twisted. Sadly, Naruto's reaction is so OOC it ruins all the fun. It would've been ok if Sakura didn't fight. But she did. *sigh* Thank you anyway, it's extremely hot and well written. I'm glad I decided to read it: I keep forgetting that SasuSaku pairing doesn't necessarily mean love between them. Everything comes to SasuNaru in the end (even if it wasn't your intention, or was it?). Ok, I'll stop rambling now. Thanks again, and if you're the author of "You Have to Trust It", I'm waiting patiently for an update.
person Neal
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Sasuke IS a whiny little weiner that everyone respects more than they should, although Naruto seems rather emasculated. I'd love to see more of your work.
person allyluv17
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! your content is definitely creative. the idea is one of the first i've came across. i also love your writing style. it's really good. please write more naruto fanfics.