rate_review Reviews

Dear Nightwolf... while your author's note says 1. You're new to fanfiction and 2. The story is by the Feehan woman. I think as a fanfiction reader one should point out a few things out to you.

1. Copying someone's work word for word is called plagiarism and is frowned upon um... EVERYWHERE not just the fanfiction world. It doesn't matter if you are copying a published author or a fellow fanfic writer, it's just wrong.

2. Stating that you aren't making money from this doesn't mean squat. You are still deceiving people who may have not read the books or your hastily written Author's note.

3. If you want to write fanfiction ... why don't you try writing something from your own brain and not from others.

Very good but near the end, you had Naruto referred to as a "she" and "her" instead of "him" and "his". Besides that, a very good beginning. Looking forward to your next update. Ja!

I understand that sometimes it's hard to get inspired to write, but you should try your hand at writing something yourself. I can't really say "Great fic," becuase it's not really yours. *sigh* Well anyway besides that it is an intersting story. I think I'll check out Christine Feehan's books. Aside, does Sasuke think Naruto is a girl?

I cant believe I'm going to do this. I am righting a flame. I never do that. But I have no respect for people who steal others works. And Christine Feehan is a great autor. Its fine if you are inspired by her works and want to write something similiar, but stealling her work and changing a few names isn't going to cut it. If this is only what you are going to do, then I suggest that you quit writing right now.

I noticed at the end you were calling naruto 'her' was that just a slip up or does sasuke think hes a chick? -slightly confused-

I have every single one of Feehan's books and I have to say this, those of us who write do it because
1:we love too
2: even though we borrow characters from naruto our stories are literally our own imagination at work
its wrong to steal something someone works so hard to write then try to claim it as your own.
Feehan is one of the best authors I have read, and those of you who like Vampire should read her books...

Though I am kinda instrested to know how you were planning to get past the baby part, seeing as how its a BIG part of the story.
you should try to come up with something on your own... maybe in feehan style but something of your very own, instead of stealing her story.
sorry but I couldn't stay quiet an author of Feehan's caliber deserves to be stood up for.
enough said

AAAAAHHHH!!!! OMG i loved it this is the first time i've seen ths type of crossover. i'm a huge fan of both naruto and feehan's series. i'm so happy you wrote this story. i cant begin to tell you how excited i got when i came across it. i hope you continue to write and i'm most definitly now a loyal fan.

oh my what wrong with Naruto and what is Sasuke? good start to your story

wow! that was so beautifully written! I cant wait to read more! please update fast!

I think it's a really good start. I like the concept of a lifemate. Very cool. Keep it up! I wanna read more! ^^ <3