rate_review Reviews

Well I have got to say you have a lot of guts to copy right from chirstine feehan and to also the books name. But more than likly nobobys read her books and would'nt say anything. Oh well I'am pretty sure you will be changing the story soon and it will not appear to be a ripping off of her books.

Interesting start for what looks like a vamp fic.

Just a few points: there are some grammar mistakes within this story. If English is not your first language, then I suggest getting a beta. If it is, then read the story out loud. You'll pick up the mistakes easily that way.

Also the format is hard on the eyes. Break it up into a few paragraphs with linebreaks.

Oh I forgot. Everone who is reading this fic and want to know how it's going to end well all I have to say is read christine feehan's book called Dark Melody and to the anthor this is not a flame I love christine books and do not like running into a blant copy right. I don't mind whan the writer uses the outline of her books and ideas. But come on. This is word to word from the book. oh and from the frist review i agree with you.

You know... you shouldn't post a published novel, even if you do change the characters names, etc. It's not fanfic, its not original. Please don't do that...