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for Love That Transcends Time

by Kerowyn

person hogo-chan
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter! I loved it so fscking much! please please please please please update as soon as you can! Your fic is amazing! ^_^
person Kai
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the little annoying ball of light and happiness! that's a great line! i was cracking up!
I'd like to see some more Gaara, he's cool! BUT DON'T FORGET, HIS EYES ARE GREEN!!!!!!!
sorry, but so many people say that they're blue.......grrrrrrr
anyway, keep writing!
LOVE YA!
Kai
person Banzai-san
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHH!! Another chapter! Love it and can't wait to read more!
person Kai
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Iruka is so funny, although i would think that would be what Kakashi would do.....
Love it!
Kai
person vampchic
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me like! I like what you did with Kakashi and Iruka. They were so cute! Cant wait to read more on those two.
So does this mean that Naruto will be staying with Sasuke till he can get a new place?? Cause I'm sure that some very interesting things could happen during his stay there. Hope they realize their feelings for each other soon.
Update soon. Me want to read more!
person remi
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it, Kakashi hokding Iruka off *rotfl*, and Sasuke actually laughing until he cried.
You have done a wonderful job... please update soon!
person Anon
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start!
I look foward to seeing more!
person yukiko
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
narutooooooooooooooo noooooooooooooooo

please more
person baka neko
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is really great! it's well-written, with a cute plot. so, since naruto's apartment complex was burned down, where will he stay? or should i say, who will he stay with? (sasuke maybe? that could get very interesting!) i love how they're acting shy around the other. and sasuke can laugh? who knew?! but anyways...this is a really great start to what could be a really great story. hope you'll be updating soon cuz i can't wait!