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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this story so far, but you have to continue with it. It's a cliff hanger...and those hurt!! Dont know why, but they do....
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the plot of your story is good......
i only wish that the story won't be a mess up one
im glad that you make naruto a violinist he seems perfect for the role...
oh by the way why is there a pi and a dog in it can you explain it?????
im really confuse in the role of the two animal..... ty
i only wish that the story won't be a mess up one
im glad that you make naruto a violinist he seems perfect for the role...
oh by the way why is there a pi and a dog in it can you explain it?????
im really confuse in the role of the two animal..... ty
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am loveing this fic its great, i've also seen yami no matsuei i own it keep up the good work can't to see what happens next update soon
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good so far. cant wait to find out how everyone will enteract with each other.
so Naruto can summon spirts? I'm guessing he can summon his demon?
hope that you update soon, want to read more.
so Naruto can summon spirts? I'm guessing he can summon his demon?
hope that you update soon, want to read more.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
neat start what's next for our little blond ?
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. well you have tons of run-ons, and some of your paragraphs could be split into two. Perhapes you should think about getting a beta. Other then that, I liked it. I would like to know how Sasuke works into Naruto's life since I have never seen Yami no Matsuie. And I would also like to know why everyone is picking on the poor boy. Anyway, update soon. Want to read more.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a great first chapter
can't wait for the next chapter
just make sure to watch out for spelling errors k
so update soon
can't wait for the next chapter
just make sure to watch out for spelling errors k
so update soon