rate_review Reviews

sweet story! Was glad to see a sweet Sakura finally.

*Does a little dance* Yay for pairings!!! I was just backreading some stories and BAM! I came across this one. And am I ever glad I did!! I opened it up, just for the KakaXIru factor, and next thing I know, I've read the whole thing in one sitting. Yes I know, I'm insane! But this story had all my favorite pairings, and I just couldnt resist! I mean, my favorite pairings, in order are KakaXIru, ShikaXKiba, SasuXNaru, and NejiXHina.... so boy was I ever pleased!!! Yeah, this story is old, so you probably won't read this, but hell! I'll express my gratitude anyway! *Does another dance* You rock my sad little excuse for a world!!!!!! ^_^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

eeeeh... sidenote! I forgot to mention how funny the idea of Gai bowling was!! Heehee. I know it was back in the early stages, but the image won't leave me... Once again, you rock!!!!!

SO you're finally done, huh? *pouts* ^___~ It was a very enjoyable "journey", both exciting and well written. Oh, and both epilogues were good, but I think I liked the second one more......... ^^ I look forward to reading more of your works in the future -- thanks again, and keep up the good work!!!

i.. loved... THAT! it was so great, and it was so multi-storied but even i wasn'y confused and it was great and i'm glad orochimaru died and yaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!! ^^]

ah, finally. ♥

it was perfect, i just wish there could be more. good job, ke

Absolutely wonderful ending -- very sweet! ^^ I look forward to the two epilogues -- thanks again, and keep up the good work!!!

*is exstatic that you updated* Yippeeeeee!!!! XDDDD

Hi there! I've been gone the last month on vacation so I wasn't able to read the updated chapters until today, but (obviously) I'm back now, sooooooo......... ^^ As for the Neji/Hina "lemon", I'd say go for it. I personally prefer Sasu/Naru or Kaka/Iru, but then again, who doesn't? ^___~ And I am a fan of "Hyuuga-cest", as some like to call it, but unfortunately most people either don't like the pairing or just can't pull it off. However, you have done a great job of keeping everyone in character, especially in an AU fic, so again, I'd say write a "lemon scene" if you want to and think that you can have it turn out well, but if you don't think you can make it happen, then don't. Wow, that was an awkward sentence......... But as I was saying, I think that a lemon would "fit" in the story, but it's not neccessary, so........yeah, whatever. ^^;;; Oh, and btw, I loved the last few chapters (Naruto and Iruka are just sooooooo adorable, ne?) and I'm looking forward to seeing the progression of Kakashi's and Iruka's relationship. Keep up the good work!!!

aha, i'm still waiting for a kaka/iru lemon.

it will happen, or.. uhm... i will make it happen? D: