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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh ohohohoh will sasuke and naruto be together that would be great! your a really good wrighter!!!keep up the good work!
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooohhh this story has serious potential! It will be fun to read if they turn out criminal or good and this quiet naruto idea is interesting since most stories are based on the loud characteristic drawing out saske.. so now how will they bond i wonder?hummm can't wait for an update how will the highly irratating sakura react to a silent naruto..
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, I LOVE your story!!! That´s so... so... exactly what I ever wanted!!
It´s great, especially how Ino jumps to conclusions... *snicker*
I can´t wait to read the next chapter!!
I´m curious how Naruto will react once he fully realizes how much of an impact his mutenss will have on his life and I really wanna know how this changes the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto... It was quite obvious in the second chapter that a lot of things between them are going to change.
Bye,
Shiruy
It´s great, especially how Ino jumps to conclusions... *snicker*
I can´t wait to read the next chapter!!
I´m curious how Naruto will react once he fully realizes how much of an impact his mutenss will have on his life and I really wanna know how this changes the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto... It was quite obvious in the second chapter that a lot of things between them are going to change.
Bye,
Shiruy
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hissing laughter??? who is that Orochimaru??? or could you be thinking of already entering w/the Akatsuki??? oh well, GREAT chapter Poor Naruto all he wanted to do was have a bit of a lie in...oh well, I LOVED the fact that Ino is so understanding but man oh man LOL...Sakura wonder how she will reall react w/they are all together...LOL..that was GREAT THANKS:D
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok !!! Interesting...
As someone said you've great problem with commas.... if it doesn't bother you, I've a 'wonderful' (my teacher's opinion) paper, that explain how to place Commas, I would like to send it (or rather I would copie the important part) to you!!! If that could help you !!! :D
Now story : I absolutly love your 'quiproquo' about the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto.
First of all why Sakura denied what Ino had said about Naru/Sasu when she saw Naruto leaning on Sasuke ? Saying something like : 'Sasuke is just being a good soul, helping a loser like Naruto...' or 'Argh That Baka of Naruto !!! How dare he touch my Sasuke' (<= inner Sakura)... And I really would like to know how will react Sakura : I don't think that she will let it go : so will she try to separate Naruto and Sasuke ? Or will she simply hate Naruto even more and try to make him miserable ? She could think that Naruto doesn't speak anymore to her because he thinks he is too good to speak with her ?
About the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke, will Naruto inform Sasuke about what happen to him ? Or will Sauke find the true by himself ?
I know it's a lot of question that you won't answer immediatly !! ^^
So please update soon !!!! :)
As someone said you've great problem with commas.... if it doesn't bother you, I've a 'wonderful' (my teacher's opinion) paper, that explain how to place Commas, I would like to send it (or rather I would copie the important part) to you!!! If that could help you !!! :D
Now story : I absolutly love your 'quiproquo' about the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto.
First of all why Sakura denied what Ino had said about Naru/Sasu when she saw Naruto leaning on Sasuke ? Saying something like : 'Sasuke is just being a good soul, helping a loser like Naruto...' or 'Argh That Baka of Naruto !!! How dare he touch my Sasuke' (<= inner Sakura)... And I really would like to know how will react Sakura : I don't think that she will let it go : so will she try to separate Naruto and Sasuke ? Or will she simply hate Naruto even more and try to make him miserable ? She could think that Naruto doesn't speak anymore to her because he thinks he is too good to speak with her ?
About the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke, will Naruto inform Sasuke about what happen to him ? Or will Sauke find the true by himself ?
I know it's a lot of question that you won't answer immediatly !! ^^
So please update soon !!!! :)
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's good! i have only one thing to say... KILL MITSUKI!!! HE'S A BASTARD!!! *couch* yeah, well... there!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ACK! evil oro~chan has shown up! I real like the story and i hope you keep wrighting it. ^_^ cant wait for the next chapter.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good chapy! It appears that Sasuke enjoyed that accidental kiss.^^ I hope that this will be a SasuNaru fic. Personally, I can never see the blond being with a chic. It just doesn't sound right. Naruto needs a strong hansome guy to hold and protect him! (Never mind that he can protect himself, well, most of the time anyway.) Mizuki needs to die!! It sounds like Mizuki is joining the Akastuki. Aren't they going to be mad at him for killing off Naruto? Cause aren't they wanting the Kyuubi? Yup, I hope that they kill him off nice and good! Update soon, kay? Cant wait to read more!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I find this mute Naruto most engaging. I hope you keep events close to the originals. I'd like to see how this Naruto handles them differently. I wonder how the relationships between the characters will change as well.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update, it seems your making Naruto and Sasuke not exactly start out at each other's throats, I like that. I'd prefer a M/F with Naruto but whatever works for the story is fine. ( This is alot coming from me, lol, but I'll continue reading even if it turns Shonen-ai) You have me quite curious about Ino and Sakura's relationship over Sasuke's (imaginary?) attraction to Naruto. Can't wait for the next one, keep it up.