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*raise your hand if you want to kill Mizuki*

*all hands raise*

That prick, ruins our Naruto. He should die very painfully and Sasuke should do it. That way Naruto can take out Itachi and its all good.

Love the story. I really hate Mizuki. But I think Naruto will overcome this, there are sign languages, and stuff for him to over come this.

It is said that the best Ninja is one who makes no sound, now Naruto fills that space.

Keep up the awesome work, Coolsa.

impressive chapter i really enjoy your writing style so keep up the good work and update soon

the story is coming along nicely, it'll be interesting to see how the various members of the village change their relations and attitudes towards Naruto now that he's so quiet...it'll also be interesting to see how Naruto will deal with the fact that he can't verbally defend himself.

Stupid 3rd. Switch Sakura with Hinata! *shakes fist at the Hokage* Man, you got me all excited with that possibility and then it didn't happen. No fair...

YOSH!~! Must update, m-u-s-t!!!! I will send a rabid pack of ferrits for you if you don't!!!
Itachi: (glares) what was that?
Uh ... well, foxes then. Naruto won't mind if I borrow his summons. ANY WAY, you have me hooked! ^-^ I'm tearing at the eyes for Naruto, and I know that life is deffinately going to change for Konoha's number-one 'loudmouth ninja'. T-T I would feel terrible! One of the only ways Naruto has to get people to notice him is by yelling! I know you have a plot for this, and I'm eager to see where this takes Naruto and co.! Please update sooooooonnn!!!!
~blue 1/2

Very good so far! The twist that you've added is very unique, and with it so far you have done an admirable job of keeping Naruto in-character. Because of that, I look forward to reading where you will take him next. Thank you for writing it!

*teary eyes* Poor Naruto! But I love how this fic was written not only very well but also very realistically and I daresay that it will be interesting to see how Naruto grows as a person and as a ninja without his trademark voice. This has been one of the most enjoyable fics I have ever read I truly look forward to reading more of it as it comes out. Hm, my only criticisms are as follows: in the prologue the dialogues are a little crammed in between sentences and grammatically all new dialogue should be a new paragraph, a few sentences where some commas would make the sentence sound better eg: "Naruto smiles more fully this time" would make more sense written like: "Naruto smiles, more fully this time", a slight tense thingy, most stories are written in past tense, but you are one of the few authors I have seen pull off present tense throughout the entire fic and do it well. All in all a very enjoyable read, keep up the good work!

Random note: If you plan to have Naruto with a girl, can I implore you to 1) pair him with medic intrested Hinata 2) anyone besides Sakura or 3) change Sakura's personality. You can ignore the last part as you see fit since you are the omnipotent author, but that's just my request. Of course I have no problems with yaoi pairings either.

While it is rare that I read M/F fics, if they are good. Really really good, I read them.

I like this set up, I like it so far.

Keep up the great work. Coolsa.

Damn, I feel sorry for Naruto, and i'd feel sorry for anyone else who went through that (they wouldn't require it as much though as they'd be dead). Anyways, I just wanted to say that this is an excellent story and your writing style is great. Keep up the good work and update a lot.

great chapter really loved it i really liked some of the words you used to make it sound more....complex when reading hope you update soon can't wait for the next chapter and keep up the good work