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I seriously love this fic! Cant wait to learn more of how this will affect Naruto. Poor Naru! I wonder how the meeting will go? What will happen and all? How the others reaction will be? How will Sasuke and Sakura treat him? I want to know these things!! Update soon, kay! I sooo want to read more!
Psst! *Nudges you* If ya do have any kind of pairings, make em m/m! XP

really good
update soon

i can't believe it. i can't believe you just stopped here!!! how could you? that is so unfair! i wan' an update!!!

Absolutely wonderful story. This is definitely one of the better stories I've read that branch off from the main plot, especially so early and with a geat original plot. If you don't mind answering, I got two questions for you.

1) How will Naruto communicate with his teammates later?
and 2) Have you any idea of the pairiings yet?

I'll be watching for future updates.

WooW! Nice! I love the opening. You now have my interest. ^_^. I expect great chapters from you. till then. ja.

that was a GREAT chapter and man oh man he's gonna kill himself if he isn't careful...Is he only going to wear the face mask from the neck down??? oh well thatw as a GREAT cahpter and its to DAMN bad that that A-hole got away...oh well, can't wait to see what you are going to do next:D THANKS:D

okay, I will wait for my answer but not too long !!! so you've better to update pretty soon !!!
You'll make a M/F pairing ? Why not !!! But if you do a Naru/Saku, I'll become sick and MAYBE stop reading... I can't stand Sakura, she's such a useless weakling !! She gets on my nervs, always need to be saved and always screaming...
I have a question on the line time, Did konohamaru and Naruto meet the day of Mizuki's attack ?
An other question, will someone apart from Iruka, konohamaru & co and Sandaime visit Naruto ? I don't know, like his teammates (forced by Kakashi to creat and/or reinforce the link between teammates) or Hinata...
Hope you'll update soon !! ^^

Oh, that's horrible! I know Naruto isn't exactly your most blood free anime, but wow. This is completely plausible though, which I really like. It'll be interesting to see how poor Naruto copes with not being able to talk, much less yell. So far you're also keeping the them very in-character, despite this being such horrible circumstances. I have a few questions, but most will probably be answered later, so I won't ask them. One question is: you wrote that his vocal chords are gone, so... Mizuki hacked so much that he tore them out? I suppose I'm not the best at anatomy. Another thing is the facemask: is that one of Kakashi's? That's all the questions I have; I'll just wait eagerly for the next update. ^_^

Great job!

I really like this fic. I hope you continue it and find the time to update it as often as possible. I can't wait to see what Naruto's like with his team and with everybody else. His voice was one of the things that got him noticed the most and now that he doesn't have it, what will he do? Does he find another way to communicate? How's everyone else going to react to his silence?

What about Mizuki? Does Naruto run in to him again? Does Iruka get the chance to kick his ass?

Sigh. You're going to make me wait, aren't you? Meh. Can't you send me the story telepathically...? Guess not. I guess I'll have to check aff.net obsessively like everyone else. Meh again.

Gaah... Wow. Your story is deep and truly touching. I myself--as all the other readers--am a HUGE Naruto fan. It was very interesting to see that you started this story from almost at the very beginning. Usually most of the fics I have read are either up-to-date with the animated (not manga) series or take place years later in their own view. It was very interesting to see that you started before Naruto became an official Genin. ^_^ Your story has touched me, gah, it made me cry. I myself LOVE to write stories and at times I can be pretty critical of other's work. But yours definitely moved me. I may just be over-emotional and a cry baby, but I really enjoyed reading your story and I definitely look forward to reading the next chapter! You've done an excellent job with the prologue and the first chapter; you captured the character's personalities perfectly.

I also found it very interesting that you used Mizuki. My friends and I, while we were out at Disney, had huge discussions about our Naruto-theories. Mizuki happened to come up. We were all wondering what happened to him? He was there for the first and second chapter, but after that he completely vanished. There was nothing said about him afterward, so I was happy to read about him making another appearance.

You've done a GREAT job so far, keep up the good work! Ganbatte! ^__^ I'll be keeping a look out for the other chapters!

~Kyouta-kun