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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting. I'm looking forward to reading what happens next.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You've nearly make me cry, nearly !!! And now all i want is to kill the curlcrip that try to kill our dear Na-chan !!!
I would like to know : since Mizuki ran away from jail, surely before Ibiki interogate him, why wasn't there an alert ? Or maybe Ibiki hadn't be call yet and they will discovered that Mizuki is missing just when he will come... And I also would like to know how Mizuki get out ? did he have help or not ?
Update soon, please !!!
I would like to know : since Mizuki ran away from jail, surely before Ibiki interogate him, why wasn't there an alert ? Or maybe Ibiki hadn't be call yet and they will discovered that Mizuki is missing just when he will come... And I also would like to know how Mizuki get out ? did he have help or not ?
Update soon, please !!!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. You had better update this! I need to know that Naruto will be okay. Also how this will affect his life as a ninja?
Very good idea you have here. Poor Naruto.
eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
Very good idea you have here. Poor Naruto.
eagerly waiting for the next chapter!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS BRUTEL great start waiting for the next chapter keep up the good work
update soon
update soon
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!!! That was so cruel! But also so very good! I really want to read more! Wow, you had me sitting on the edge of my seat! You had better update this!!! And soon! I just have to find out what happens next! Poor Naruto!!!!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy shit!!!! that was good my friend told me to come here good job!!
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Veeeerrry interesting. Can't wait to see how your stoy develops. I will be keeping an eye on you... in a good, non-pervy-stalkerish way. ;)
And love your name! :)
Mistress Arts
And love your name! :)
Mistress Arts
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think this one's got a lot of potential.
it looks very interesting and i wonder how naruto will cope with losing his voice.
I'd like to see how it turns out. ^^
keep up the good work
it looks very interesting and i wonder how naruto will cope with losing his voice.
I'd like to see how it turns out. ^^
keep up the good work
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. I wonder how this will change the team dynamic?
Will he get a different team, will there be a wait? What is going to happen now?
What is with the m/f and m/m?
Naruto is getting with a male right?
Cause I support anything m/Naruto or Naruto/m, I don't know why but my first fic ruined a Naruto/g pairing.
I literally can't seem him with any chicks? I can't even get past the intro for a chick one, and I stop.
I guess because my fav character is Naruto, and he can get paired with any guy he wants, but I can't see other characters as well.
Oh well I am weird. Love the start of the story. Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
Will he get a different team, will there be a wait? What is going to happen now?
What is with the m/f and m/m?
Naruto is getting with a male right?
Cause I support anything m/Naruto or Naruto/m, I don't know why but my first fic ruined a Naruto/g pairing.
I literally can't seem him with any chicks? I can't even get past the intro for a chick one, and I stop.
I guess because my fav character is Naruto, and he can get paired with any guy he wants, but I can't see other characters as well.
Oh well I am weird. Love the start of the story. Keep up the great work. Coolsa.
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man that was a GREAT beginning but POOR NARUTO!!! YIKES....oh man can't wait to see where this is gonna go because WOW!!! I hope they catch that Mizuki B@ST@RD!!!