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please please update soon i want to know what happens so please update.

You are a very skilled writer. I like your charaterizations. My only criticism is you lack description in some important places. As an artist I am inspired by this story, but I have some questions. How short is Sakura's hair--like pixie cut short, or a few centimiters long? Is she changing her outfit? Are Naruto's new clothes exactly like his old ones, just different colors? Or are there other differences?

ok... I'm officially addicted to this fic. Please tell me there's more coming soon? The premise is just fantastic, and you are carrying it beautifully. Well done

I'm suprised that the doctors didn't try to shove some 2-cal down his throat to try and help him get some sort of nutrients back into to his system though...
Sorry, I work in a medical facillity in Western Australia and 2-cal is what we give to patients who don't eat. It looks like Ice-coffee, as thick as honey and smells like ... ... ... Vanillia/Caramel milkshake? (And I have been told that it is one of those things that you either hate or love.)
It is also easy for people to swallow if they have a swallowing problem. *Thought that you would like to know what is out there that poor Naruto could proberly have for nutrients.*
Either way, I so enjoyed your story and am now eagerly awaiting the next installment.
Keep it up. ^_^

Well, I like the story and the idea. ^-^
Only, it seemed like they realized the bad stuff Naruto gets a little too quickly.
I'll be awaiting the next chapter with great anticipation. :D

I love this story so much and you ahven updated in so so long! please tell me you haven't given up! Please dont let this story die! waaahaa! *cries*

Can't wait for the next chapter.

heh! *smiles* this is really good so far! if you have it, i really hope you get over your writer's block soon! i'll show up again once you have another chapter up, cuz this is one of my favorite reads! it's hard to forget even after you haven't read it for awhile, the grammar and spelling is almost 100% perfection, and it's written so well! catch ya later! *grins and darts off stage-right*

Oh no...Itachi on the move! Looking forward to more. And how is Naruto going to communicate over distance on missions? Can he use his shadow clones somehow? Or, getting back to basics, a whistle system would work, using an umpire's whistle. Great story. I'm enjoying it very much. Thanks heaps! Justkat.^_^

Love it! Love it! Love it! So please update! I have always been found of alternate timelines and this is turning out to be one of the best, so I'm begging you to continue on bended knee.