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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHA!
Even loudest boy became muteness, he still wrote a lot of sentence even more than Hinata’s speech!
Hey! Naruto may turn to be “Romance Novelist” like Jiraiya [^_~] (which he could easily “gathering information” cause he so quite now!)
I like the scene, Naruto and Hinata in hospital. It was like in main story that Naruto encouraged Hinata to be more confident and brave (when she fought with Neji) even he still in unstable condition like that. That similar with their relationship in main Story.
You could make Hinata return Naruto’s kindness by encourage or comfort him when he feel unconfident or depress.( Like the scene at training area in main story that Hinata encouraged him before he fought with Neji in final round of Chuunin Exam. )
Even loudest boy became muteness, he still wrote a lot of sentence even more than Hinata’s speech!
Hey! Naruto may turn to be “Romance Novelist” like Jiraiya [^_~] (which he could easily “gathering information” cause he so quite now!)
I like the scene, Naruto and Hinata in hospital. It was like in main story that Naruto encouraged Hinata to be more confident and brave (when she fought with Neji) even he still in unstable condition like that. That similar with their relationship in main Story.
You could make Hinata return Naruto’s kindness by encourage or comfort him when he feel unconfident or depress.( Like the scene at training area in main story that Hinata encouraged him before he fought with Neji in final round of Chuunin Exam. )
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice...I love how Sakura and Ino are all trying to figure out why Naruto was hurt. Great job!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. Threesome! Sakura, you little perv! Ino, you big perv! I hope Naruto get's out the hospital and goes to kick some Zabuza/Haku butt! Or maybe convince them to join Konoha... I always thought it was a shame that Haku dies before he gets the chance to tell Zabuza he loves him, and Zabuza never realises he loves Haku until Haku dies... So sad... Anyways! On with the fic! May the river of your ideas never run dry!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wooot! i always end of reading one of your fics cyber, at least once a week, i like this one the best!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah! Updates occured! *dances* I love the way you write Sakura-chan. Its so annoying when she's mean and tries to break Naruto and Sasuke up in some fics. And i love the thing about Ino keeping her hair! I can just imagein her hanging it up like a trophy or something. I can also imagine her teammates thinking she's weird b/c of it. lol! I eagerly await the next chapter!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always a very good chapter... Sakura didn't give up yet ?
For Sakura research, it should be easy. Just look on the regist for Naruto birthday and 1+1=2. Afterall, there is not many solutions : It's evident that Naruto's secret must come from his past... so it can be from his parents... maybe they will learn something...
For Akatsuki, I would have believe they have spys in Konoha. And could you give us some hint about what happenned to Mizuki ?
Continue, please !!! ^^
*Hug the author* Thanks for all !! :D
For Sakura research, it should be easy. Just look on the regist for Naruto birthday and 1+1=2. Afterall, there is not many solutions : It's evident that Naruto's secret must come from his past... so it can be from his parents... maybe they will learn something...
For Akatsuki, I would have believe they have spys in Konoha. And could you give us some hint about what happenned to Mizuki ?
Continue, please !!! ^^
*Hug the author* Thanks for all !! :D
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wanna a SasuNaruSak threesome! Just one would be enough! PLEASE! Update soon!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
COOL. I'm liking this alot. good work!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like so far i keep telling my friends to read it and next time i well tie her to a chair and make her. any ways keep it up and update soon i really want to know what Itachi well do. i'm sooo excited!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wheee! Much goodness.
I like this story very much.
It began with Sakura just a tad too whiny but I like how she's started to come into her own.
You crammed a little to much exposition in there but I can see how it would be hard not to.
Other than that it's a very enjoyable story and I look forward to reading more.
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I like this story very much.
It began with Sakura just a tad too whiny but I like how she's started to come into her own.
You crammed a little to much exposition in there but I can see how it would be hard not to.
Other than that it's a very enjoyable story and I look forward to reading more.
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