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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sad, I had a whole loooooooong review written and something happened and it disappeared and now I have to try to write to whole thing over again and I don't wanna:'( Damn, anyways I'm gonna try to remember all of what I wrote though I'll probably forget most of it.
Basically I love this story, it's well written and any grammatical/spelling errors there might be are very unnoticeable. The only problem I have with the story is that is causes so many questions but you only update about once a month. So long to wait, but I understand that you have a life and this story probably isn't a priority, more of a hobby. I was wondering that you were going to do about Naruto communicating with the rookie nine+Gai's team, are they going to learn sign language also or are Sasuke and Sakura going to be his interpreters? Also when you get into the major arcs, are you going to try to write them all in one chapter or are they going to be split up among many. You probably don't have this planned out, but the reason I ask is because I read a story recently that had single days split up into like 10 chapters. The only thing that helped was that the author updated about every 3-5 days. But if your story was split up like that combined with the montly, the anticipation would drive me insane. But I wouldn't give up on it because it's too good. I thought about the whole Haku thing and I remembered that Haku had been and Anbu in the mist village so that would probably take care of the communication thing since the signs he's learning are Anbu signs, so I guess I answered one of my own questions. Your story causes too many questions in my head. But moving on to things I like. I like Sakura's Hinata haircut (what I imagine it looks like). I guess she decided to do it early, so that's one thing that definitely won't be the same. Also the sharing thing is pretty funny, I guess she didn't mean what it sounded like she meant when she said that. I also like to see Itachi, he's one of my favorite characters in the series. Anyways I think this review is stretching a bit too long. Having to rewrite it brought up a few more questions but I think I'm bothering you with all the questions and your probably not going to answer them since I'm asking you to give away your story so I'll stop with the ones I've already asked. You said to be patient so I'm going to try, but I'm not very good at it. So please update soon, maybe earlier than a month. Please please please
Basically I love this story, it's well written and any grammatical/spelling errors there might be are very unnoticeable. The only problem I have with the story is that is causes so many questions but you only update about once a month. So long to wait, but I understand that you have a life and this story probably isn't a priority, more of a hobby. I was wondering that you were going to do about Naruto communicating with the rookie nine+Gai's team, are they going to learn sign language also or are Sasuke and Sakura going to be his interpreters? Also when you get into the major arcs, are you going to try to write them all in one chapter or are they going to be split up among many. You probably don't have this planned out, but the reason I ask is because I read a story recently that had single days split up into like 10 chapters. The only thing that helped was that the author updated about every 3-5 days. But if your story was split up like that combined with the montly, the anticipation would drive me insane. But I wouldn't give up on it because it's too good. I thought about the whole Haku thing and I remembered that Haku had been and Anbu in the mist village so that would probably take care of the communication thing since the signs he's learning are Anbu signs, so I guess I answered one of my own questions. Your story causes too many questions in my head. But moving on to things I like. I like Sakura's Hinata haircut (what I imagine it looks like). I guess she decided to do it early, so that's one thing that definitely won't be the same. Also the sharing thing is pretty funny, I guess she didn't mean what it sounded like she meant when she said that. I also like to see Itachi, he's one of my favorite characters in the series. Anyways I think this review is stretching a bit too long. Having to rewrite it brought up a few more questions but I think I'm bothering you with all the questions and your probably not going to answer them since I'm asking you to give away your story so I'll stop with the ones I've already asked. You said to be patient so I'm going to try, but I'm not very good at it. So please update soon, maybe earlier than a month. Please please please
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a really unique idea. I actually have a hard time imaging naruto quite. Though I like that he uses sasuke a a plushie (makes me laugh every time). Sakura is annoying, but that is her character... Uhhh well i just wanted to drop a review saying how awesome your story is and how much I am enjoying it. I hope you get the chance to update soon :)
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I readlly readlly like this story please please update asp
THANKS
THANKS
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whats the deal, you keep changing your names--are you still going to go as Song Min Dao over at fanfic or are you gonna to change that to because if you are you are yu are making one hell of a time to find your fic to read. It make one wonder if it worth to trouble to read if i can't find the darn thing. thats a shame i enjoy your fic tooo.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job there! I can't wait for the rest of the story...^_^v
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please don't end there i need more chapters to read!!! please pretty please e-mail me whenever you post your next chapter update!! I love this story heeheehee..... *teareyes* poor naruto *sigh* when he finally has something good going for himself then something bad had to happen but I like reading stories like yours that kicks butt!! *giggles* please update soon!!!!!!!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eee! BAD Mizuki! BAD! ::stabs Mizuki plushie with kunai:: Poor, poor Naruto... Get better soon, and eee, SasuNaru-ness! More hugging and closeness and stuff! Great fic, please update soon! *^_^*
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how Naruto is so confidence boosting! Update as soon as possible!
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was AWESOME!!! YAY!!! Hinata is so cool...so is this going to be Yaoi or is it going to be Het?? Don't really care either way, its a FANTASTIC story...THANKS:D
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey
This characters well written as always. I really wish that the chapters would come out quicker, but I understand that life comes first for most people. I'm not sure if I've said this before, but I think your story is a very unique plot. I've actually looked but I haven't been able to find any other stories with Naruto being mute, I've seen mute Sasuke stories but none with Naruto. I guess other people aren't up for the challenge of writing Naruto without his big mouth. But so far I think you've done a very good job, Naruto still seems like Naruto despite the fact that he can't talk. So I was wondering if you were going to keep the story going at this same basic pace or if you were going to speed it up after a few chapters. Cause I wanna see Gaara and Neji and in the series they don't come til later. I can see bringing Neji into the story now because they do live in the same town and they probably would see each other but we probably won't get to see Gaara until the Chuunin Exam:'( Are you planning to keep the major events in the series the same in your story, meaning are you planning to have them all happen and happen basically the same? Like how is Naruto going to cuss his way into getting a C class mission if he can't talk, and if he does do that how is the Wave Mission going to change? Is Naruto going to save Haku, are they still going to have their conversation without Naruto being able to talk? Damn now that I've started thinking about these things I'm going to wonder and wonder until your next chapter comes out. Damn, I really hope that the next chapter doesn't take too long. I don't really have to say anything about your grammer, spelling, or writing style because they're great as always. Anyways enough questions and comments. I'll just end again with great story, great chapter and please update soon. Really soon:)
This characters well written as always. I really wish that the chapters would come out quicker, but I understand that life comes first for most people. I'm not sure if I've said this before, but I think your story is a very unique plot. I've actually looked but I haven't been able to find any other stories with Naruto being mute, I've seen mute Sasuke stories but none with Naruto. I guess other people aren't up for the challenge of writing Naruto without his big mouth. But so far I think you've done a very good job, Naruto still seems like Naruto despite the fact that he can't talk. So I was wondering if you were going to keep the story going at this same basic pace or if you were going to speed it up after a few chapters. Cause I wanna see Gaara and Neji and in the series they don't come til later. I can see bringing Neji into the story now because they do live in the same town and they probably would see each other but we probably won't get to see Gaara until the Chuunin Exam:'( Are you planning to keep the major events in the series the same in your story, meaning are you planning to have them all happen and happen basically the same? Like how is Naruto going to cuss his way into getting a C class mission if he can't talk, and if he does do that how is the Wave Mission going to change? Is Naruto going to save Haku, are they still going to have their conversation without Naruto being able to talk? Damn now that I've started thinking about these things I'm going to wonder and wonder until your next chapter comes out. Damn, I really hope that the next chapter doesn't take too long. I don't really have to say anything about your grammer, spelling, or writing style because they're great as always. Anyways enough questions and comments. I'll just end again with great story, great chapter and please update soon. Really soon:)