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by MistressofDragons

person bookworm51485
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually I forgot something, I know you said you don't really have pairings in mind and either way they wouldn't be central to the story but even a background romance in nice to see in some stories. So I wanted to beg for a SasuNaru pairing just because I see the potential there, not only because of what Ino and Sakura think, but also because of the way they are acting towards each other. It's so cute and I could really see them toeghter.
person Yum
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank for the answer... That more clear like that !!!! :D
I've a question (annoying one) : why didn't Sakura ask why the adult hated Naruto directly to him ? She stayed all morning with him. She was quite bold when she asked to Kakashi without a thought of what Naruto could have felt to be speak of as if he was not there.
Honestly, if someone knew, it would be more certainly be Naruto..;
Anyway that was an AWESOME chapter !!!! Can't wait for the next one !!! ;D
Ganbatte !!!! ^^
person Maelik
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what will happen next. Love your fic, by the way. Though it is kinda weird to imagine Naruto quiet...but it's still good.
person vampchic
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I seriously love this fic. Cant wait for the next update. I'm very curious to know if Sakura and the others can figure out why everyone hates Naruto and if they do, how they will react to it. Though I think that they'll think nothing of it and wonder why the adults made such a big deal out of it. Anywho, update soon please!
person Shadow117
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, MoD! I always wondered why nobody ever asked why he was hated in the actual anime... I mean, you think they'd be asking questions when an entire populace loathes one certain person. Anyway, you did splendid on keeping all of them in character, have managed to be one of the few to get me to read a Shonen-Ai (If it turns out as one, that is.), and have me curious as to what awaits them next. Good work.

P.S. - Do you plan on doing any of the anime/manga arcs? (A simple yes or no will do. Unless you just want to leave me hangin' in suspense!)
person madnarutofan
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm, I thnik the story kicks ass. Really, it's a great original concept! I notice that there's some leaning towards shoen-ai with Sasuke. I hope you don't go down that road. It'd be great if they were friends maybe, but not that. There's just too much yaoi out there. Anyways, I'm really looking forward to seing the advancing teamwork and new jutsus of NAruto. We never really see many of the stealth oriented jutsu because Sasuke and NAruto are more of the overt destory-all types. I can't wait to see their teamwork improve with the anbu style training and code either. Good stuff to look forward too. I hope you update soon. I't be great if you'd send me an e-mail alert, but I won't be surprised if you don't. I'd like to b e bale to keep up with the story's progress. if you also have some time, check out my developing story at ff.net . madnarutofan is my penname too
person Leasan
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a sweet fic! I love it so far, especially the way Sasuke acts and the way you change facts according to Naruto's state. Great job! I hope to see more SasuNaru moments :)
Update asap!
person silverfox
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter keep up the great work update soon
person hogo-chan
schedule September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how cute! I like this fic! It really puts a twist on things! naruto passes out almost every ten seconds though... it's kinda weird/funny/sadistically amusing. but I like the different relationships between the characters in this fic. It seems to me like their attitudes are pretty much the same as in the actual series but the motivation behind them is a little different. I don't know. It's late and I'm exhausted and I've been spouting nonsensible shit all day so, just ignore me! ^_^ I really loved the fic anyway! I cant wait to read the update!
person Danny
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE your story. i cant wait until the next chapter. please write more.
THANKS