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Ah.... Super !!! You update !!! I was happy to re-read this chapter, You're an Awesome writter !!!! I'm so damn tired !!! My sister just gave birth to my first nephew and I've not had a minute for me since then... Pfiou... But fortunetly you update !!!!
I've a question thought... I was thinking (That's very difficult because I'm tired as hell) Isn't it a little bit strange for Kakashi to give 'solid' food to Naruto knowing that he will be unable to eat it ? Isn't it a lil' bit too obvious that Naruto won't eat it and thu give it to Sakura... (he wouldn't give it to Sasuke and wouldn't let it waste...) ?
Plus, I would like to know if Naruto had eat or drink since the Academy's episode ?
Continue your Hard work !!! :D
GANBATTE !!!

You finally updated! I always have liked the ones where something happened so Naruto wasn't so much of an idiot. Sure it's part of his charm...but I'm a sucker for the quiet competant ones. Lol. Anyway, you have a plot line, that while not entirely original, is still very engrossing. And I'm glad that Sakura isn't such a bitch anymore. Could you maybe make her useful too. I know that later in the series she gets much better, but in the beginning...god. I mean is it too much to ask that she at least fling a kunai in the general direction of the enemy instead of sitting there like a statue. Sorry. It's one of my rants. I'll stop now. But please, update soon. I'll be anxiously waiting. Ja.

That was nice...sibling love everywhere...UPDATE SOON!!

that was an AWESOME, I LOVED that bit w-the 3 of them all asleep like puppies:D I just thought that was so bloody CUTE!!! THANKS:D GREAT chapter:D

God I love your story, it's one of the favorite stories that I'm reading right now. Just wish it was updated as often as some of the other ones. But that's ok, I'm just that your updates are long also. Your story is the only one that I've seen of it's type, not many people want to make Naruto a mute it seems. Anyways I think that the quality of writing is really good and your grammer is also really good, especially compared to some of the other writers there are. Though sometimes I wonder if I might be slightly desensitized. But anyways I like where the stories going, I know you said any pairing would be secondary to the story and that's ok. But is it ok to still make a request? If so I would like to request that there be a SasuNaru pairing and if that's not going to happen then there not be a SasuSaku or NaruSaku pairing. Ok so I end with a good job and please update soon, soooooooooooooooooooooooon. Like tomorrow

it's nice, you're currently re-writting the story.

I hope you will continu this, I really like it

Brilliant start,glad to hear this is gonna be a long one.Thank you.

I just wanted to let you know how very much I've enjoyed reading this. It's rare that I find a fic that I keep rereading, and this is proving to be one of them. Taking Naruto from the first episode and throwing a twist into it is brilliant, and this twist works beautifully. You made me rewatch the first couple of episodes, drat you. Worse, I'm contemplating fan art, which as a pro illustrator is bloody unusual for me. I adore the idea of Naruto in one of Kakashi's masks. The idea of him sombre and revengeful equally appeals. (Bugger, I am going to end up drawing.) I think your version of Sasuke works. Something more vividly and immediately traumatic right in front of his eyes would, I agree, force out the softer side of him. I'm avidly awaiting your next installment, and will be badgering a friend of mine into reading this too. -J.

Ok I'll send it to you as soon as I can !!
It was a great chapter !! Especially the way you explain Ibiki's mistake, it's the most credible way !!!
Just a few stupid questions I was asking myself while reading :
When Sakura doubt Naruto and Kakashi's word about Naruto being attack by Mizuki, why wasn't Naruto's reaction more violent ? trying to scream wasn't enough, I would have imagine Naruto Trying to yell something like 'I'm not a liar' as he take down his mask !!
Why didn't Sakura make a remark about Kakashi having the same mask as Naruto ?
I hope you will be able to update soon !! ^^

i really liked this chapter sakura is a major BITCH man!i like how sasuke helps naruto but trys to hide it keep up the fantastic work and update soon