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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! This is great, and I hope you make progress on it. I'd love to see more!
It's hard to find good Kisame/Itachi fics out there... so It's refreshing to find one in the works... At least I think it is? XDD <3
It's hard to find good Kisame/Itachi fics out there... so It's refreshing to find one in the works... At least I think it is? XDD <3
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June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a satisfying read,you are a good solid writer,there was something very winsome,appealing about this fic.Great characterizations,Itachi always seems to push himself no?Like Sasuke and Naruto for that matter
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*twirling happily* YES! FIANAAALY! I love this paoring, but when I started visiting this site I found NOT ONE KISITA fic. I hope you continue with this, if only to satisfy me (no, I'm not self-centered, what are you talking about?). You have a pretty good opening chapter, the meeting of the eyes is always a good way to start off a smut story, and personally I think it's best to set the stage before diving into the steamy scenes. Good luck fallowing up with Kisame's reaction (though it seems like he half saw it coming) to Itachi's blackout. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOH! That sounds so interesting already. I truly hope you'll continue. I am KisaIta fan at heart. One of the few out there. XD
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Usually I'm not a big fan of this pairing, but I love the way you portrayed the characters. Keep up the good work and pretty please update soon.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Itachi/Kisame is a good pairing and I like the way this is written.
Two small nitpicks though: it's Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi. I've checked them both, written(raw and translated) and spoken, repeatedly to be sure that these are the correct spellings...
Otherwise I saw no faults with this and I hope to see more of it.
Two small nitpicks though: it's Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi. I've checked them both, written(raw and translated) and spoken, repeatedly to be sure that these are the correct spellings...
Otherwise I saw no faults with this and I hope to see more of it.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo. please continue! I love ItaKisa! Very well written. =P
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really interesting. I never really read an Kisama/Itachi fic before. Itachi as uke... proves interesting enough. :P Kisama was acting like a bit of a mother-hen, though... Don't worry, it suits him ;) Please continue the story.