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for Wire by Moonlight

by seoinage

person Leech
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now look what you made me do! I woke up my neighbor with all that insane cackling after I read the last sentence. Geez.

Good work. ;)

DL
person Kagalli
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, that was cute. I love the last line.
person Redsliver
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I'd rather read a small concentrated fic than a large diluted one.
person The Gandhara
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but it's difficult to enjoy such short pieces. They're already finished before you begin diving into the story.
person Spitfire666
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O I don't know how you managed it in 100 words, and the fact that this was a GaaIno pairing, but I found it incredibly hot. The style in which you wrote it set a very vivid image! ^o^ Now, if I can only find someone who writes sandcest that well...