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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When will the 4th chapter be up on this fic, I really want to read it
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story rocks!!!!! Ihope nautro gets perg with sasu's child. What I relly like about this story is you talk about how hard it is for sasu to tell nautro about his fellings. Its very nice when sasu treats like a human being not a freak. Over all this story is very kawii!!!!! I GIVE IT A -A+ & 100%
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aagh. You bastard. Leaving us with only four chapters. That's just evil. Make it longer. Please?
I'm loving the story. You handled people's reactions well, if the description was a little brief. I would ask you to make each of the chapters longer, add more detail, but I know what a pain in the ass it is to try to force that. Anyway, good job. I can tell at least a decent amount of effort went into this, unlike most fanfics here.
I'm loving the story. You handled people's reactions well, if the description was a little brief. I would ask you to make each of the chapters longer, add more detail, but I know what a pain in the ass it is to try to force that. Anyway, good job. I can tell at least a decent amount of effort went into this, unlike most fanfics here.
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh mY god!!! this is awsome!! You really gotta finish this, I was really sad that it didn't continue, you can't imagine how upset I was!
I do have one thing to say though, and that was that I think you had Naruto acting a little too girly. A bit too weak. I know in this he's finally being a girl and stuff, but still. I think he may be acting just a little too weak.
But whatever! other than that, I loved it! :) write on, my friend!
I do have one thing to say though, and that was that I think you had Naruto acting a little too girly. A bit too weak. I know in this he's finally being a girl and stuff, but still. I think he may be acting just a little too weak.
But whatever! other than that, I loved it! :) write on, my friend!
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
last one! last one!!!! please post the next chapter up soon i hope theres gonna be a good lemon on the fourth chapter, nyahahahahaha!!!! you know yondaime? four chapters? ahhh what the hell who cares?, update soon this is such a cool fic! ja! ^_^.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
xD Thats funny.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE don't make the next chapter the last one! And if you do, write a sequil!! I'm totally caught up in the whole idea of this.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was interesing and funny!
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey good chapter i wish more ppl did naruto storys like this cause they kinda make aot of sence anyway update soon
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome fic I love it update soon