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for Puberty Sucks

by orotaku

person katwingz
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While admittedly a little confusing at times, what with all the he then she then back to he again, I rather liked this. There are probably a few places where the grammar and such could be cleaned up a little, but this fic has a lot going for it. Like humor. Oh my GOD, I laughed so hard when I got to the end of the chapter. The last, like 60 words totally hooked me. *Which is funny because its supposed to be the first 60 that hook you, but oh well. Whatever works, ne?* I will be looking for updates on this fic, you can be sure. And while I might not always review, because I'm kinda shy like that, if you see the hit count going up, its probably me, reading the latest chapter like four times. And I'll make my coauthor Jayne read this one too, its that funny. Ja ne!
person Chibigirl-Lin
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD LMAO XD
u HAVE to finish this!!! I've never read a fic where Naruto is a girl! Becoming a girl I have read... but never being one from the get-go... and I must say... I like it... a lot! X) I wounder... what kind'a bet does Sasu have w/ Kiba? @o@ oooooh! I bet Sakura is REALLY jealous! cuz, I think back to episode #101(that one was funny XD), so Sakura knows that NOT ONLY has seen Sasu in nothin' but a towel (X3 lucky Naruto) but has ALSO seen Sasu changing back into his normal clothes! X3 I wonder how everything'll turn out? @o@ PLZ CONTINUE!!!
person d(^_^)b
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"--it's harder to hide your gender when you have boobs." <-- One would think...~_~;; Lol...omg this was funny...XD
person haydn
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OmG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 FUNNAY!!!!!! XDXD still laughin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
person lainofthewired
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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Okay, that was pretty good. Interesting, too. I usually avoid SasuNaru like the plague, but yours is...intrigiguing...yeah ;)
person Shai
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I look forward to seeing how you explain, I'm unsure of ths fic but it could be really good I think, please write mre ne.
person Shai
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I look forward to seeing how you explain, I'm unsure of ths fic but it could be really good I think, please write mre ne.
person Stranj100
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Only one thing. Why did Naruto hide his/her gender, whatever?
person chicken_little
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I have yet to read a "female" Naruto as well written as yours. I hope to see part 4 up soon! (...so I read the first three parts on fanfiction(dot)net...)
person Anon
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
shikatanai, ne? ^^ kore wa hontou ni omoshiroi ka!