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person Anon
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Utterly charming! Thanks!
person kataru
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*squeal* lol i thought it's sasuKE's handwork embroidery, I was thinking of ordering some XD
person kataru
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
blah couldnt help but to review again. Just wanna say your story is real cute @_@ and CUTE. sasUKE is dmaned cute, with his possesive trait that is. XD couldnt help smiling.
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice.

I want to see a sequel. Or just another NaruSasu smut.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is such a cool story
=)
person VRon8899
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww....I loved both..hott cute and fluffy!!! Just the way i like them ^_^;
person kaze
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very hot and yummy! What a great read ^___^
person patosan
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for PWP. I loved it!
person DeadUchiha
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really nice! I must say, i usually run screaming from 'first person' fics, but this was actually well written! The charaterizations seemed fine to me. There wasn't enough interation (except for the smut..heh) to be OOC, and as far as Naruto's 'thoughts' are concerned...How can anyone say that someone's thoughts are out of charater? And if they did, then just slap them! Heh! *pats you on the back* Good job! I think it would be cool if you did another one of this but from Sasuke's 'evil' P.O.V. Heh...if you ever do that, or anything similar, let me know! Hahaha...d(^-^)b
oh yeah...nice smut BTW. gotta love PWP.
person Christina
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really great!!