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person archaicrose
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice.

I needed that.

;)
person MultifacetedTune
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeeee!!! OMG, that was AMAZING!!! I loved it!!! *glomps* Go you!!! ^^ Very cute idea -- it was adorably funny and quite well written!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!
person nejinee
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very awesome story. You characterized them really well. I did enjoy it ^^.
Sasuke's so evil, lol.
person ace
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Truly awesome fanfic!
person blisblop
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your first?I am envious and startled.It was a slendid job.It was funny "road of doom",charming "until I was left whimpering rather shamelessly in his grasp" and hot what with the "snapping hips" ,harshly massaged buttox and being "squashed between his broad body and the back of the couch',the mewling,the...you get my point.Sweet,write more soon.There is a contest for new writers,under two fics posted,in the Narutoverse called I believe "My Fandom Needs New Blood".You should enter!Google it or e me.I'll look it up,my memory stinks or I could tell you right now .Dead Line June 15,1995.Try Naruto specific fan fic sites,they have it posted too.I am entering my first try evert so the more the merrier.
person Germaine(2 lazy to sign in)
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, that was fun...you should continue this one!

Anyway, love it!

Ja ne!
person Phoe-chan
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naughty Sasuke-kun...

Nicely written.