rate_review Reviews

It was good but also lacking in depth, just a little more detail with Neji and Shikamaru's "play" would have made this great. But they were all in character, love that, it was funny and well written. Good job overall, I hope you write more for Shika/Neji

Nice! I absolutely love the ShikaXNeji pairing. And I can definately picture Kiba as the sick, perverted one. That was a great conversation about his sister's porn. lol Keep writing!

You have just reverted me back to NejiShika. 8D

SO beautifully written...

Well,wouldn't you?

yes!nejishika smut!oulala!hot!more!more!come on!spread the nejishika love!XD

Great fic! Such a teaser ^_^

Nice little fic! Shikamaru needs more blowjobs. Yum. And I love Kiba's obnoxiousness. ^^

People don't appreciate this couple enough.... I love this story and its pairing.

That was excellent. You had Kiba completely in character, not to mention amusing. The only problem I noticed was that in-- I think-- the third to last paragraph, you randomly switched from past tense to present tense, then after that paragraph switched back to past tense. It's nothing big, and this is definitely not a complaint because your writing is FAR better than that of most of the people who post here (which I have to thank you for), I just thought I'd mention it in case you want to fix that tiny mistake.

Good work, and I hope to read more from you.

I can't believe there are no reviews! I'm still laughing at Kiba, after reading the whole thing!

Really well written, I like it!

x Kori x