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Pleeease write some more on this story.. it would make me HAPPY!!!!!!!

I _adore_ your writing style. It's dark, and deep, and passionate. You portray Sasuke probably better than any other writer I've encountered. (myself included, of course) This was powerful, moving, sexy, and yet disturbed. Particularly the end as just... gripping. It was dark, and just... gah. Wow.

Amazing. ¢¾

Very intense!
-in a good way, there are writiers who have tried to write this genre of fic, but not many succeed as you have.

moar?

Very well writtin please update soon.

YAY! LONGER STORY! WOOTNESS! I'm glad it's not gonna be a one-shot anymore! This was amazing :D

'Ello! I'm probably a bad person, to like this as much as I did, but I never claimed to have morals anyway. You kept Sasuke amazingly IC, despite what was happening. He kept fighting for all he was worth, and even after everything, he tried very hard not to cry, like he was trying to cling to his pride like the stubborn kid he is. Admittedly, I think that Kakashi would never do this, but you did reason it out very well at the end: trying to help Sasuke become strong. Warped logic, yes, but I've decided that Kakashi must be a bit off his rocker in this story. Just a bit.

Overall, I thought this story was well-done. Very few (almost nonexistant) grammar errors, there were a couple paragraphs bunched together that made it a bit difficult to read, but it was bearable. I actually enjoyed reading the story a lot. It was rather chilling and I couldn't help but feel sorry for poor Sasuke, who is my favorite target of torture.

Anyway, I hope to see the next chapter up soon, it sounds like this could get very interesting. The only request I have is toward the POV. Go crazy with it, if you so desire, but please keep it consistent per chapter. It drives me insane when half the chapter is in third person, then switches to first person. Unless you can do it elegantly. Anyway, keep writing.

Wow you know this is about my third time reading this fic and i only just realized that i havnt reviewed this yet.....poo poo for me


I like fics that make no excuses for themselves, Rape fantasies are an integral part of many pf our subconscious fantasies. While i myself would probably not enjy being raped i cant say that i havnt fantasized about it. Oh well i have no pretensions about it and am more then willing to confess it.

Poit in fact...we all have our dirty little secrets and more often then not its the people who protest the most who take the dirtiest pleasure out of it.

CASE IN POINT!! why does naruto call Ebisu a closet pervert????? cause he is so strict and so willing to come down on people who are open about their intentions that it is more then obvious that he himself wishes he could feel that open about his perversions. So it is just a reason to look at certain reviews and smile and understand that they DID get some sick fascination out of reading this story, and you have to accept the review in the view it wasnt intended....its a complement...no really.

so anyways
happy writing
Kri-chan

I love all of your stories on adultff.net, It all makes me hang in suspence for more, and all my favorite characters being raped by the characters that I love to read about that do the raping! kakasasu & kisaita... mmm, tasty. But in stone cold you mentioned an itasasu AND orosasu (which equals love by the way) but it's been months! I can understand if it's school or job, or a trip, or something, but please tell me what it is!! I'd like to know, and hopefully tell me when/if there coming out! (that includes all the other stuff you mentioned, and I quote-


"And yes, I'm planning on writing fics with Itachi/Sasuke and Orochimaru/Sasuke. Already planning a one-shot shower scene with Itachi, also one where Sasuke gets his revenge.
Working on something with Orochimaru, featuring Orochimaru's Incredible Stretchy Powers. XD
Planning on a long one with a darker, somewhat disturbed Kakashi and a self-mutillating Sasuke... Maybe more fics where Sasuke cuts himself, maybe bring in suicide as a theme.
And I have no theme or plot idea for something with Kabuto, but I sure as hell want to write something because he's the second hottest guy in the series! XD Maybe with the stretchy Orochimaru fic... hmmm..."


-so ya see? You can obviously tell why I'm (trying but failing) patiently waiting for your other amazing ideas!


P.s. please email me back soon!

oooh, i liked this!!! ^.^
would love to see this fic continued!

Orochimaru/Sasuke? Will you really do that?? YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love that pairing!! :3 can't wait to read it!!! XD

*smiles* Well, this hideously cracked egg would like to say that she is loving how you actually *gasp, giggles* snuck in some plot that halfway works at the end. I could see this continuing if you wanted to though it would definitely, probably, *drools in anticipation* get a whole lot messier. Though maybe not. You could throw a sweet little twist where Kakashi starts caring for Sasuke in such a way that he doesn't want to hurt him anymore. Oo! Or Itachi shows up in gets jealous..*shudders* I suppose truthfully it's a wee bit out of character for Kakashi, but you're writing is pretty clean and sharp so it isn't a pain to go with it. In fact I like it. What did you expect!?!? You said it yourself--hideously cracked eggs!! *smiles*

I like all your pieces by the way--they have that sharp edge that makes me shudder and my gut burn. It's my form of stress relief when rugby season is done so kudos and thanx! Most authors shy away from just fucking everyone up as badly as possible. *tilts head* But it's kind of interesting to watch, isn't it? Hmm.