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oh please finish this fic!!!!! please!!!! i'm dying to see sasukuro and naruhina come to completion!!!!

wow that was awsome i wish there was more .. please please update this story.. later for now ..
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...And I Thought 'Duty' Was Sweet & Sexy.Wow.This Is Awesome.Poor,Sasuke.I'm Not Into Yaoi/Yuri But It Doesn't Matter As I Don't Read Those Parts...

I Loved Naruto And Hinata In This Fic.

And It's Very Well-Written,As Well. =)

i have a strong gut feeling that sasuke might not be straight in this fic...o man.
great job with the naru-hina tho.

[pun intended] I hope I don't have to wait forever for you to update..please update soon. I've been following all of your stories so it's really nice to read a naru-hina amongst all of your pairings. please continue.

I sometimes wish people would leave their e-mails for me. Zetnnik left a review and I wish I could respond, but instead I'll review my own story. I like this one alright, but honestly it was started because people kept saying "sequel! sequel!" but I didn't really know what to do with it. I forced it from the beginning and it does show, I know that. I have toyed with re-doing it and making it better. I know where I want to take it and I think it would be good. I just need to re-do some characters and such. It's a rather blah story really, but it has some fun moments that I enjoyed and ones I got some good comments on. All in all, not my best work, but it has some redeeming qualities here and there.

I'm sorry, but I'm disappointed with this story. I was really looking forward to this and expected it to be the same caliber as SW since it's the sequel for it and especially since it is NaruHina (my fave ship). I find the NaruHina parts a little forced. Naruto finds out about Hinata and then bam, they're together? It just did not flow. The characters are inferior to how they were described/portrayed in SW, especially Sasuke. I don't know why he's gay in this story, when he wasn't in SW -- he also seem almost uke in this story and I just cannot picture him that way. The Sasuke character is too arrogant to be uke. I loved him in your "Duty" story. Now, that is how Sasuke is supposed to be portrayed as.

I love this story. So sweet. Keep writing.

Oh I need more!! This was so good too!! I don't think I even blinked through chapter 5, lol, it was just too good. I might have missed something otherwise. I hope you're not finished with it yet because I'd love to read more in this storyline. Especially Kuro and Sasuke. But the Naruto and Hinata is awesome too. It's just all great.

Supurb.
I canot wait to see what happens next!