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for I Would Wait Forever

by bean1498

person Brick Elite
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Even though I personally despise yaoi, I could bear with you through the Kuro sections. The NaruHina is wonderful. Update! ^_^
person Kinomoto Neko
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please Update! We've been waiting forever! I can't wait any longer!
person AngelsWarmth
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really interested in this story. I find it wuite cute how Naruto and Hinata's relationship is progressing. Well I can't wait until the next chapter, thank you.
person Mizura
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well written. Please continue!

(The shy-innocent Hinata had condom in her pocket? Konoha sure has sex-ed. ^_^)
person Josh
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story I kinda went past Sasuke and Kuro.. I am not able to see that Sasuke would go for a guy ... But a great story indeed.. I hope to hear from you in a e-mail JTB8834@aol.com... Well keep up the good work
person NekoGirlLara
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! This is wonderful! I can't wait for more!
person neko kittie
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
eeee that was really exciting i hoope you do another chapter real sooon , i can't wait.
person Beulah Page
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another superb job. Naruto is absolutely adorable. And you do so well at balancing the serious mission part with the romantic interludes and humorous one-liners. Looking forward to more!
person cose
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i wanna see more naruto hinata! UPDATE!
person naruhina113
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats was so cool please update soon! i enjoyed it so much! I got really aroused by the naruhina thing!