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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome story. please update, naruto is lucky.
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVE YOU.
This is the first Hinata/Naruto fic I've read since I've become a Naruto fan and I must say, you've done a great job portraying how they'd be. Hinata's reaction was exactly what I would have pictured it. Perfect!
I can't wait to read more! :)
This is the first Hinata/Naruto fic I've read since I've become a Naruto fan and I must say, you've done a great job portraying how they'd be. Hinata's reaction was exactly what I would have pictured it. Perfect!
I can't wait to read more! :)
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice i liked this fic just like ur shotgun wedding one its great cant wait for more
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written scene at the end, this is great!
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the first naru hina lemon done and i say it took just the right amount of time to finish it wasent to shourt or to long that it got boring i say it was perfect
keep up the good writeing and you will gain a large folowing of fans of this fic
good luck with the next chapter and happy writeing.
ja ne
ps email me when theres an update plz ^^
keep up the good writeing and you will gain a large folowing of fans of this fic
good luck with the next chapter and happy writeing.
ja ne
ps email me when theres an update plz ^^
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* I'm going to go take a COLD shower ok? God that rocked! Update soon! I re-read chapter one because it's just so darn cute! The part where Sasuke is holding the baby and it starts blowing spit bubbles get me everytime. "See? We understand each other." *laughs* so cute.
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
you really write the best smut my friend! I commend you. *Salutes*
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
you really write the best smut my friend! I commend you. *Salutes*
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww cute - but 'sob' no mention of your faitful beta lol - man I couldn't type that with a strait face
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This was so erotic and romantic. I loved it! It's a bit odd that they're this intimate after only a couple weeks of relationship, but what the heck, they're not little children anymore. Plus, both of them wanted their relationship to be really serious.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter, wonderful job with the description
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know, i liked shotgun wedding a whole lot better. for some reason, naruto and hinata dont seem right together, okay fangirls, dont shoot me, but i dont think naruto's interested. at all. so this idea just doesnt work for me and the other narutards who have read this fic. i like your writing style though. thats what got me so into shotgun wedding.