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for I Would Wait Forever

by bean1498

person Lisan
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
edit: narutards ive talked to** sorry
person aoshi4misao
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I love the Naruto/Hinata pairing, and you have certainly done them justice. I hope it works out for Sasuke too, even though I don't like him much, he still deserves some love. Great job. Keep up the good work!
person nauto-fanfic
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good funnys in there to i like it very witty in hinatas resposnes me like

update soon
person naruto-fanfic
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm waiting for the het lemon
person naruto-fanfic
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hah so your hinting at sasuke being gay right
poor naruto and hinata geting into that situation but naruto handeled that suprisingly well.
i like the story. update soon
person Nagakura
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shotgun wedding blew me away, no pun intended, and this sequal is really good to. I'm stoked for the next chapter. I check this site once a day to see if it's up yet. Not a fan of the lemon parts being between Sasuke and that dude though. But it's still a damn fine story either way.
person blisblop
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kuro eh?Yum.Kuro an' Sasuke,sounds like an expensive exotic cocktail...and so it is!I must admit I never read het stuff cause I thought everyone would just hook up in Het pairs good fit and characters be damned,I stand corrected.Nice plotting,sensible handling of situations was a plus reading this.Action between characters hot,sensual.I really liked Naruto's nude fishing and the cerbal interplay in that scene made me start at the beginning and do more than scan the story.I don't usually scan either,fate i guess.wink.Nice read.Well done.
person nonengel
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter... the differences in the paces taken by the two couples is making for a nice contrast
person Lizzie
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yet another awesome chapter. Keep up the great work! :)
person Saico
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again, simply great.