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Souded quite hot! I wish I had been there to see.....it would have been interesting.......Update soon! I love your fic!

-Chelsey- AKA:HisBeautiful

Another awesome chapter! I especially loved the NaruHina moment, and Pakkun catching them. And although I've nothing against gays, I don't want to read any yaoi or shounen ai, so I skipped about half of the chapter. But the first half was good, and the last few sentences wher Naruto was joking. Anyway, great job, and I can't wait for chapter 5; how close will Naruto and Hinata get? *winkwink*

good storyso far. i hope hinata and naruto get together. keep up the good work and i look forward to the next chapters.

wow...

I want to write more... really but its late and thats all that comes to mind... just... wow. I'm goin got have to go back and read the prequel for this just so i can adjust to your take on the characters. Don't get me wrong, they're enjoyable, its just either I read oyur other story our let you keep blowing my mind away.

on a side note, i like how the resolution between hinata and naruto has been going

W00t! more chapters! This is developing quite nicely and interestingly I think. I hope you write more soon!

Normally, I don't review here. I come to this place for smut, and smut I get. I love the site and all, would donate if I could, but I've found that few of the stories here actually warrant a review. This... this warrants one. My first review for this place. I haven't read the prequel to this one (Not a big fan of Ka/Sak), but having read this one, and how exceedingly well written it is, I think I'll go read the prequel anyway. As for the story itself, well.. it's pretty awesome. I've found very few stories that make the situations that show up in this one believable, but this manages it. I also like the fact that Hinata was a bit suspicious and didn't immediately throw herself into Naruto's arms and sleep with him. I'd critique, but I'm not sure what I could do! Keep up the work, this is amazing.

wonderful updates!!! it's really a treat reading your chapters!!! you're simply addicting!!!!!!!!!!! *fangirl squeal* please update again soon :D

I must say... I enjoy this story...
You are making it fun and very entertaining to read. Good build up.

I just wanted to say that I really like your story and you write very well. I also thought Shotgun Wedding was fabulous. *thumbs up* And congrats on you getting married and have fun in Japan. *broods* lol

weeee!!!!!! an update!! nice!!!! and wow! congrats and good luck to you!!!!
eheheheh.... um, about sasuke.... you dont plan on making him... y'know... eheheh necermind i'll just see what will happen next