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uh well.... eheheh he really is gay.... well, run out of options to whom he should be paired with....
eheh NaruHina smexiness... i miss sakura already... adn kakashi too!!!

This looks like it's starting to get REALLY good~ Anyway, keep up the good work. It's sad that Kakashi has to leave Sakura for a while and they can't keep making babies. :O I wonder what are her feelings on taking care of twins without Kakashi. XD

oh how funny - hinata's a very naughty girl underneath it all really lol
I like how you still made her understanding so the problems with naruto were overcome quickly enough - it seems like a very hinata thing to do

Update soon! I'm loving this almost as much as Shotgun Wedding! If your smut scenes are still the same I may be fanning myself off soon! I like how Hinata's finally becoming more brave, it suits her.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

Hah! I knew it! I knew from chapter one -- you didn't make it very obvious in shotgun wedding -- that Sasuke would be gay in this story. Just by the way he thought about Naruto and his body. And the fact that he didn't want to be caught peeking or that mention of his comparing Naruto's size to other men. The beautiful man, Kuro, just sealed the deal. It was only a matter of time for him to come on to Naruto, and he did. I really do hope you can finish this before you move to Japan. Do you plan on living there permanently? If so, cool! Have fun learning the language.

I love your writing. The Naruto Sasuke rivalry is great but somehow I can read this and wonder when I'll get to see Kiba next.
Keep it coming!

Awesome chapter again! I've become addicted to this fic. I don't mind Sasuke being gay, just so long as it doesn't go anywhere and we don't find out what he's thinking; this is NaruHina, and I'd love it if you kept it that way. Wonderful pairing choice, by the way; best pairing ever! Congratulations on your moving to Japan (lucky bastard!) and getting married (not quite as jealous about that, but it's cool nonetheless). Can't wait to see what happens next!
P.S. - About how many chapters will this be? Do you have any idea?

Good chapter. It wasn't boring at all.

I liked the detail of Hinata leading. It's original, and it can help develope her character more in many senses.

The river situation was classical. It can be old, but it never fails to make me smile.

Update soon! Sorry it took so long for me to read this. I've been busy working both my jobs. Congrats on getting married soon! I hope all works out well for both you and the story you're writing.

-Chelsey-

Heh, a one sided Sasunaru where Hinata will actually eventually win Naruto (not that he's a prize to be won or anything heh)? Isn't that against the rules of the naruto section on adultfanfiction.net? LOL Well _I_ love that aspect of the fic. I'm a major NaruHina shipper and the high amount of NaruSasu compared with the tiny bit of naruhina has always annoyed me.

Although it seems like it almost could go in a weird. o_0 I don't think you intended that. If this was just a pure smut fic I'd be all for it, but I much prefer lemons with emotion and characterization. Well, there's always alternate chapters eh?

Anyways, I like this fic (Shotgun was good too). I do think your going a little overboard on the female ninja pregnancy rate, though. If Tsunade shows up with some really late in life pregnancy I'm just gonna have to step away from the fic for awhile. LOL The daycare buisness must be booming in Konoha.