rate_review Reviews

Err I accidently deleted a chunk of my last post when I sent it, so you get another one! Ok anyways, on first reading I thought there might be some kind of weird threesome thing going on here, but on a second reading it didn't seem like that. Go figure.

At the risk of sounding cheesy, I would wait forever for this one to flesh out. I can't wait to read the rest! Your pairings, rather conventional or not, always seem to somehow stay so cannon and natural rather than just superficial. Keep up the good work!

i eagerly await more, this was a simply delightful begining

oh noooo!!!! poor naruto and hinata!!! what will happen now??? please continue :D

Nice nice nice.. a sequel!!!!! anyways, you know about the lj kakasaku community?? if you have a livejournal accoutn you can post the link there... ^_^ btw, its www.livejournal.com/community/kakasaku

update soon!

i liked the chapter
i feel sorry for both of them cuz hinatas dreams were ruind and naruto was rejected
i hope they make up
plz update soon plz let this not be a one shot

Oh! I like where this is heading. Keep up the great work. ^^

nice start to this

When I began reading this I was wary, because it seemed as if Naruto was gonna like Hinata only because she likes him. However, I was quite pleased with the twist at the end, seeing that things won't be that easy. I think Hinata's reactiong was very understandable, since I could see Naruto doing what she thought he was doing. I look forward to see what Naruto does to convince Hinata that he's not pitying her.

Since they're friends, I think Naruto should have said that he wouldn't ignore 'her feelings', rather than Hinata herself. After all, it's not as if he has been giving the the cold shoulder.

I really liked this story. Good job with the charecter interactions, my only criticism would be that i don't think hinata would say that much around him so easily, like when he bumped into her. She'd probably just blush, appologize and slip away. But whatever, I guess her personality changed over time. Is there going to be a next chapter? I hope so, because i'm really looking forward to it if there is.