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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this very much!! Please write more!!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! A sequel to Shotgun Wedding! I loved that fic!
Anyways.... this chapter is pretty good! I hope you update it soon!
If youre looking for corrections on mistakes.... uh, I'm not the one to notice those things very much so don't look at me. *sweatdrop* hehe
Anyways.... this chapter is pretty good! I hope you update it soon!
If youre looking for corrections on mistakes.... uh, I'm not the one to notice those things very much so don't look at me. *sweatdrop* hehe
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I'm liking the NarutoxHina stuff, but their actions seem a bit too apprehensive for 23 year olds, just my opinion. I love your style of writing, it's very enriching to read and it doesn't get boring. Please update soon! Much love. <3
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe I was wondering when this would go up - I love the chappie so far
just write when you need me - I'll be at work this weekend to beta
just write when you need me - I'll be at work this weekend to beta
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gasp*
I'm hooked.
This first chapter has the potential to form a really good story.
You must update fast and often.
:)
I'm hooked.
This first chapter has the potential to form a really good story.
You must update fast and often.
:)
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh so glad you are back writing!!! I loved Shotgun Wedding and by reading the first chapter of the sequel I know it is going to be better than Shogun Wedding. Hope a Lemon is on its way ;) Update soon...it's soo good I can't wait =D
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just awesome ! I wished to read the second chapter as soon as I finished the first :3 great story, and that's porbably how naruto would learn that hinata loves him in the real serie XD lol update soon :D
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! a sequel! it would be cool to have an all around story this time, to see whats going on with naruto and hinata, sakura and kakashi, and sasuke and whoever..., instead of just focusing on just naruto's side of it. nice though, i liked how hinata kicked poor naruto out. i dont like hinata much, in fact, she's my least favorite character. but this is so cool and i can happily read it without thinking too much about how i dont like the character. nice job!
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
***********CUTE**************************
WOW!!! I Luv this fic a lot *wink*
Its sssooooo S.W.E.E.T!!^ ^
PLease update as soon as you can^^
~Luv ya~~~~
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh; he screwed up! She needs to understand he's not feeling guilty; he wants to know if it's worth pursuing a relationship with her. Damn, she took that the wrong way! Can't wait to see how Naruto sixes this one!