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July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool, but too little =] jk, i'd like to read the next chapters!
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good so far! ^^ Please write another chapter!!! XD You haven't wrote a new one in awhile.. ;__; Oh wells.. when you do I'll review again! ;D
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Honestly I avoid any stories with the dreaded OC attached to any original character but THIS IS GREAT. Not to mention funny...
So, I've done my duty of reviewing and if it's not enough :
I will worship the very ground you walk on, just please write more??
PRETTY PLEASE WITH *insert fav character here* ON TOP??
(-_-' that sounds pretty dirty)
Oh yeah and what does your OC look like??
So, I've done my duty of reviewing and if it's not enough :
I will worship the very ground you walk on, just please write more??
PRETTY PLEASE WITH *insert fav character here* ON TOP??
(-_-' that sounds pretty dirty)
Oh yeah and what does your OC look like??
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it ^^ Though I would have preferred if Kakashi and you? had spent more "alonetime" together. But I guess it turned out cuite good this way too, ne?
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update!!! I'm loving this! *wiggles eyebrows* sounds like Sasuke's got the hots for our main character, either that or he's being an ass.
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to say keep writng i love it X) , and when do you think are u can write some more what will happen .... npw that she is there , and what will she do please inform me or master of storoes teller for this fiction looool ...
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Although I do wanna know how they got there......Update soon! *shakes fists* there I blamed your friends....
-Chelsey- AKA:HisBeautiful
-Chelsey- AKA:HisBeautiful
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June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story, and... interesting. You should definitely post the rest. i can't wait to read more.
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it.
continue pleeze!
continue pleeze!