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for Never Forgotten

by SakuraHikari

schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No tough for me, I love Preganant Naruto fics too. I like the idea you have going on here, I look forward to seeing where it leads. I like how you gave a mention of Sasuke looking for something...(mmm I wonder what? ^ ^) Nice touch, it gives an implication that he really, really wants what he's looking for. Just watch your wording, I noticed a few minor mistakes in the way the sentences flowed. I do love how you left off, it really made me want to read more, I really want to see everyone's reaction to the person he wants. If you continue with this,(because some authors just randomly stop writing so I hope you don't end up being one of them as I really like this fic) I ask for two things; 1. Sakura bashing and 2. effeminate Naruto (I just love the girly Naruto with semeSasuke)
schedule June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this has such promise, I hope you intend to update someday. I'll be on the look out for it. I just love it when naruto is pregnate.
person Teary
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O
YES BABY YES!
You are the coolest.
person kkk
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait.
i want more.
person blahblah
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pleaseee continue this fic, it's so good!
person Mwar
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg! This is reallly lyke.really good. Seriously. I could never write this. XD;; So can you continue...please?
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeeeeeeee, mn! It's so KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!! Continue, pwease, un. -puppy eyes-
person the gier
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahw, hey, i like ur fic....


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PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
it looks like very fic i click only has one or two chapters...and yours has a good plot, dont let it die please
person Gwynhafra
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooo. I love Mpreg as well. Hope that you'll update soon.
person Alone and forgotten but still kicking ass
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
3 words: update or die. thank you for listening ^_^