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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You have to update! Please send me a mail when you do, please? I like the way this fic is going, and I absolutely LOVE mprregs. (Naruto's the 'mommy' right? Cuz making Sasuke the bottom is just wrong! *shudders* And I think that Naruto would make a great mom! *plotting happily*)
Ja ne!
// Tadashi Shimisaki
Ja ne!
// Tadashi Shimisaki
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes. You have to work on your grammar. I see that your spelling has no problems, I think. Work on it. I want to see a better chapter! :D
Oh, do email me when you update the next chapter, will ya? ;)
Oh, do email me when you update the next chapter, will ya? ;)
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this story! It's off to a great start!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok it's ben forever since you've updated so I'm going to email you and ask about this!!!!!!!!!! ok??? Ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really NEED an update I can't wait to see what happends!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Squeels* That was so OOC of me to squeel but I can't help it this fic is soooooo cool!!!!!!!!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well its a very good beginning and i want to know the rest of course!
i would suggest you get a beta writer to help you out plus they are
very good for bouncing ideas off of and that way you dont have to worry
so much about grammer especially if english isnt your first lang. like alot of people here
i would suggest you get a beta writer to help you out plus they are
very good for bouncing ideas off of and that way you dont have to worry
so much about grammer especially if english isnt your first lang. like alot of people here
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF? update, now like. you can't end it there.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey that was good. i'll give u some advice though........ update! for the love of god update! thanking u for ur time.
-bunny ^_^
-bunny ^_^
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmm mpreg... can't wait. you better update!! that was a good chappie, i hope you continue.
~Okami
~Okami
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job on the story. I hope you wright the next chapter. ^_^ I want to see how naruto will resoned to this, lol.