rate_review Reviews

your opening was very short and kept me hanging. though i love your plot for this story. i'd love it more if youd update soon and very often. do continue. ja

WOOOWWWWW
It's really nice one Glad to read it really it's really nice
Please update soon WOnders what Sasuke will do to our naruto mwahahaha
begging you

wow! this story is really good so far...and i'm not just saying that. keep going! no, seriously, keep going. i need to know what happens next! the suspense is killing me! GAH!

Oooo....this is awsome!!!!when are you getting more up?!

I like m-preg to. And those who don't, well.... their loss. Like your story so far, hurry up with the next chapter!

I don't have much to say because theres only one chapter but it dose very cacth readers attieion. I would like to read the rest. The only thing I have to say is I qoute "Its a beinging of agreat and amazing story"!!!! If need any help or ideas just email me at Skrchn569@aol.com

KYAAAAAAAAA I love it! I love it! I love it! I love it! How are you going to make it that Naruto can get pregnant. I mean how are you going to explain it. I've read some good and bad Mpreg fics ^.^ hope yours will be a good one. Heh wonder how Naruto's going to react to Sasuke's demand? Where is he? What about Itachi? Is Sasuke really strong enough to defeet him? Are Naruto going to have feeling for one another? Will love develop? ;) Are you going to make the Kayuubi in Naruto a girl fox demon? Is he going to go into heat so he is able to become pregnent thanks to the demon inside him? What about Gaara will he show up to help Naruto? Is Sasuke truely Evil or will Naruto eventually turn him back to the good side? ^.^ And is Naruto going to have a litter as in more than one baby? o:) heh. Is their more of a plot to this? What do you have planned for futur chapters after Naruto is Pregnent will Itachi and Akasutski(sp?) try and capture Naruto when he's volnerable? Is their more of a meaning behind Sasuke wanting Naruto other than lust/love for the other boy? AND how does Sasuke know Naruto can have kids?!? Looking forward to the next chapter (and hopwing many more will fallow) Ja! till next update, hope it will be soon ^_^

i like the story so far! you a good job on the first chapter and i can't wait to read the next chapter. I love mpregs and am so glad that this is going to be one ^__^. They are soooooo fun :0) keep up the good work and update soon please.:)

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! This is an amazing story! And it's your first?! PLEASE update soon! And make it longer!

awwwww I was hoping you had more please write more soon please