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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAAAATTTT????/!!!!!! THATS IT?????!!!!!! wha- tha-.... you have to post the next update soon, dammit that was so short, pls make the next one longer
i have a feeling about this fic, i know this story is gonna be great so ja! ^_^.
i have a feeling about this fic, i know this story is gonna be great so ja! ^_^.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pregnant Naruto?! That's so awesome ^.^ I LOVE pregnant Naruto! I love this fic so far, I hope you update soon!
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAI!!! :DDD I want to see more! plz continue this!^^
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this seems to be an interesting start you have please keep it going i'm ready for the next chapter so update soon
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please for the love of Yaoi continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an interesting story...i hope u post up the next chapters soon.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What's going to happen? Where's Naruto? Has he gotten back from training with Jiraiya or what about the Akatuski?
Keep up the great work, Coolsa.
Keep up the great work, Coolsa.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued
Please update soon, I like it so far,
I hope the next chapter is longer, but I guess you wanted that cliffhanger effect
Please update soon, I like it so far,
I hope the next chapter is longer, but I guess you wanted that cliffhanger effect
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning. You do need to work on the grammar and spelling. And please PLEASE start a new paragraph when a different person talks.
Never have two different people's words on the same line.
Other than that, the story is good.
Never have two different people's words on the same line.
Other than that, the story is good.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MEEEEEEEEEEP!
This is really interresting!
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter ^^
You don't see enough Mpreg Sasunaru fics around ^_~
Greetz K-chan!
This is really interresting!
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter ^^
You don't see enough Mpreg Sasunaru fics around ^_~
Greetz K-chan!