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for Indecent Exposure

by bean1498

person puppydog
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. Nice. Keep it up.
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao, I loved this the moment I read: “And what parts are those? There are a lot of good parts in that book. I don’t carry it around because I like the extra weight in my pocket,” he murmured, cracking his visible eye open.

And the last part was even better.
person Sin
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yummy! ;)
person Miomio
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Akiko: ahahaha, niiiiiiiiiiiceee :D!
person Jen
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey at last i read a fanfic that sakura isn´t so sweet and lame! yaya it´s good to see her taking control! and please make the lesson three show up and who knows a lesson 4 inside a room on a bed perhaps! hehe

keep going!
person mel
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. Good job.
person shawna
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well that was funny at the end lol. i love kakashi :)
person Anon
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the ending. The boys would be grinning too.....they like the idea of Kakashi and Sakura together, it just works so well. Update everything! I'm so hooked my dear. Redsliver is too.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
person Nushi
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love you and your smutty writing cycle! Is it monthly? I hope so. Poor Kakashi, he has such a NAUGHTY student, oh what will he do? Obviously he'll do her but this was soooo fantastic. Having sex with the guy wearing clothes is completely hot, I'll have to write it in a fic, I love the naughty erotic-ness.

Your Nushi
person sexy_jutsus
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh freak Ouch my head hurts >.< '' I was so so SUPRISED at the end when sasuke and naruto was there and i accidently lean back and laugh and i hit my head at the end of my bed and ouch that freakin hurts... >.<'' talk about suprising people lol! that was gud, i never expected that to happen lol! well, ne ways

ja ne 4 now