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by bean1498

person O_O
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NICE!!!! please write more!!!
person Rinpu
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I love the way Sakura is the dominant one.
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I liked tha end~! And everything else...
person <a href=\"http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/authors.php?no=1296768691\">Seoinage</a>
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not going to complain if you want to continue your cycle of PWPs for KakaSaku. (Seriously!) XD I like the pacing of this one juxtaposed against Girls Night Out. Very nice!
person Lizzie
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This almost makes me wish this wasn't a one shot. Lovely work on this, as always. Keep the great work up. :)
person Eternity
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg. I LOVED The ending!! <3
person DeadUchiha
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! This was actually pretty funny! I do so love one shots! nothing like a little quicky here and there to take the edge off... Hahahaha! Kakashi and Sakura...sigh...i've seen some nice ones...you pull it off better than most. So yeah...i loved the ending and the inclusion of everyones favorite boys! it would just feel weird to read a fic that didn't at least IMPLY sasu/naru action...heh. Well, i hope you find your inspiration! Keep on it! *squee!* d(^-^)b
person razielslittleflamekaat
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot! lesson three was a kicker! getting busted was the perfect end to a smutty ficlet. I love it! Great work!
person Lisan
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh what a great little one-shot. the story is good, but the ending, lol i wish i would have seen that. nice work
person Saico
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was fun and sexy. This Sakura is certainly someone you want on your side.