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by bean1498

person Heather
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great! i normally don't go for sakura and kakashi stories cuz they normally creep me out (with the teacher thing and all), but this was really hot! and totally believable. plus (and this is a big plus) sakura didn't get on my nerves. so i commend you on your wonderfully written and smut-tastic one-shot! i hope you write more like this. (or some with sasuke and naruto perhaps?)
person xgirlrogue
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe that was so naughty - I think you should do the previous encounter as well - just to give us some more background - wink wink
person fyredevyl
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, I like it! I like it! It was really hot! And I like the way you portrayed Sakura; very flirty and unapologetic about what she wants. Good work!
person Imasuky Lomae
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good i normally wouldn't read a Naruto fic but i got bored and I'm glad i found this it was one of the best one-shots I've read in a long time
With love; Imasuky Lomae
person Me..
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waaaheheheheh... SMEXY!!!! nice ending... getting caught by your teammates/students hoohohoohoho.... ^_^
person allyluv17
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEK! it's soooo good! very naughty indeed >:) *super evil grin* please write more!!! you're great!!!
person blisblop
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sakura grows up.Thank the gods.
person HisBeautiful
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NIIIIICe ending! That was fucking great! I looved it.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful