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I'd help you but I'm not that good of a writer. Besides I say your story looks awesome. I hope you keep writing. It'd be a shame for such a good story to go to waste.

Damn my computer. Sorry, about my previous review, *winces* It was supposd to go somewhere else. But I must admit that you have an awesome story. good job and please keep writing.

Please, do finish this. It wants to be finished.

Sorry about the wait guys but I have major assignments to submit so it's possible for the next 3 months there will be no updates, sorry about this.

I like it, it's only a tad bit OOC, but I'm loving it. Excellent job!

Hi.Just seeing if you updated.Hope you do soon.Have a good one!

wow.This is very realistic.The thoughts going through each of their heads.Itachi knows Sasuke is Totally against this no matter how his body reacts.Most people miss that point.This is very gripping.I often wonder how the rapist is affected,no matter what they are human too(Itachi referring to others as humans like he is above it all)and his body is forced to react to Sasukes as much as Sasukes is,its not like he is insane that he sees someone else he is useing sex as a mind fuck so it doesn't seem that this is his usual style,his talent,his jutsus are very hands off...so I was just wonderiong,Sasukes talents are not fully awakened either would stress like this do something?Anyway really great work,thank you.

No killing his family is not insulting himself its getting himself further away from them the ultimate"you have nothing to do with me ,who i am"I never claimed it was bright.You got me on the its a fan fic bit however,low blood suger that day I guess,I remember being pissed at it but second read through wasn't that bad especially with the second chapter up,it puts it in perspective.Sorry if I was a "little bitch".I was reading too many stories that where just a couple paragrphs then 'I want 19reveiws" type shit ,ya know? You gave more than most and didn't mean it in the same way I guess,it was just timing.I didn't get you down I see and thats the way It should be,I just always write reveiws,not all of them are gonna stand the test of time I can see that too.I will be more careful in the future,are we good now? I hope so.

Your writing is wonderful! I really have enjoyed reading this! Please update soon!

so um yeah, when exactly the next chapter coming out?!?!?!?!?! C'mon, please hurry, i gotta know what happens next.